Keychain Doll

And there came the day when I was bored...




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Ah, nothing showed up.

Oops. Sorry. My bad.

There it is! ^^

P.S You can double-click the image to fit it on the screen.

There are a few things a can crit for this, but it is otherwise a pretty good shot.
1)The background is kind of weird. I don't know what it is, but It is strange.
2)The pink tiara/hat thing is cut off, which is bad because it is part of her.

Good Job

-WU

Hey Yurii!

So, besides what Writers said above, I think the main distracting thing is the yellow thing in the background. I like your focus and angle, but I wish you'd worked on a cleaner background. That way, it would make the doll pop more in the eyes of a viewer.
There's some long fuzzy thing in the background below her raised hand which distracts me.

On the whole, really good!
Cheers,
~Lava.

Hello there.

First off, I would like to point out that this is a pretty good picture. Like everyone said above, the background is a little weird. It didn't bothered me at first, but then, looking at the picture more closely, I found her hand raised. I hadn't seen it the two times before, which is kind of bad. The background takes away from it, and all we can see really is her face, since it's in focus. The other parts of her, though, are not as clear and we can't see them right. That's my only critic.

Great work!

-Other One

This is really cute.

I don't see what's so bad about the background. It kinda goes with her hair, being brown.

And you seemed to have focused in on her head. That's good, but cutting off that portion of her hair spoiled it. It's a part of her head, y'see. The viewer's eyes are directed to the doll's eyes, and I went "Squeedorable!" when I saw it.
Good work, and keep taking photos.
- Alyx