Fear

I often wonder how,
Or why,
People can just stand there,
As they watch another cry,

I know the answer,
FEAR,
The scary thought,
We all hear,

The hiss that slithers,
Through our heads,
An evil thought,
My mind once read,

I was teased,
Picked on,
Called an idiot,
Called a slob,

How different my life,
Could have been,
If there was no fear,
If I had on friend,

Our lives can destroy fear,
And help the many,
That desevre our tears

Hey there,
Great poem. I know for certain that many are bullied and teased even as adults. This is something many can relate to even if they weren't bullied they must have watched someone being bullied. And yup the answer truly is FEAR. Guess we should learn to overcome it. Bravo!!
Keep it up!!
xxx Upile xxx

Hello twin. Ehte here for the review.

I often wonder how,
Or why,
People can just stand there, people just stand there,
As they watch another cry, as they watch others cry.

I know the answer.
FEAR.
The scary thought,
We all hear, thought we hear? Does not sound good.

The hiss that slithers, Love this line. Good. Just remove the comma
through our heads.
An evil thought,
My mind once read.

I was teased.
Picked on.
Called an idiot.
Called a slob. Avoid repetitions.

How different my life, No comma.
could have been,
If there was no fear.
If I had on friend, I suppose you meant 'one' over here.

Our lives can destroy fear,
And help the many,
That desevre our tears deserve

The flow was missing from your piece. If you try working on this a bit i think you could just make it. And do take care of the punctuations too.
Keep writing.