Glaze

This is something I whipped together last night at, like, 11:00, and I thought it sounded decent enough to submit.

Great job kafka! very very original and it was a great addition to your classic style. I've never seen anyone master that style like you seemed to.

Wow, probably the most original thing I have seen for a long time. This is review is pretty lousy but I am going to try and find something useful to say. The only thing I can think of is putting spaces between some of your words, the ones that have been joined together, I know this is intentional but it's really hard to read but then again maybe that's whole whole point. The use of dot points is quite cool tough, initially I though it was crazy but now I really like it!

I feel like I'm missing out. I couldn't download the attatchment. Safari wouldn't let me ... Oh well. I'm sure it was great Kafka. I can assume by your other review comments.