Is this too much like Harry Potter

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Too much like Harry Potter?

Yes, make it so that it's not a boarding school or think of something else
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Yes, just forget the whole idea
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No, it's fine
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OH SNAP.

Have you heard of Charly Bone? Your leaning towards that...I hate Charly Bone. :P
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Never heard of it- I'll have to look it up :D But I've you hate it then perhaps I'll have to work on it a bit more :P
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See, the thing is that at some point, someone somewhere will always compare you to another writer. No matter how well you write, no matter how amazing and fresh and original your ideas are, chances are there will always be some other writer, obscure or famous, that you can and will be compared to. Some comparisons are more obvious than others (Eragon and Lord of the Rings, but only because the former is a cheap rewrite of the latter) but for the love of god don't worry about it.

Make the story your own, but don't try so hard to avoid being compared to other writers. Chances are that it will at some point happen, not because you're not an amazingly original writer — which I'm sure you are — but because people do that. Don't worry about it and keep writing. (And maybe, maybe when you're done the story, if someone can write a lengthy, articulate essay on how your work is a rip-off of Tolkien and they have a point, you might want to listen to them. Maybe. Not necessarily. They may have ignored your geniusly unique plot points, so it's your choice.)
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No, I hate Charly Bone because of the style not plot. :D
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you can still carry on; and maybe you might outdo Rowling!!
if you get a plot don't let it go-keep the story going no matter what.

i'm writting a novella but i'm stuck-at least you seem to be full of ideas!!

just try not to make the entiree plot-including minor details exactly like HP.
otherwise there's nothing wrong with your central ideas.
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Thanks, smaur and Sohini- I guess I'll just have to see where it goes, eh? :)
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I'd drop the part with the war. To me , that makes it to Harry Potterish. Otherwise,it is AOK :wink:
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First of all, why are you writing this? Think about it. If you're writing this solely to become a best seller, then you probably should stop. First of all, J.K. Rowling has the market on magical schools, so they may not want to turn to you.

However, any idea is worth writing about if you really truly want to write about it. Finally, there are no original ideas that we write about. Its the style of the writer and the little quirks involved in the story and characters that make the story strong. If you really love doing it, your love will shine out from the story and make it a little gem.

So write it if you want to. If you love what you're doing, it won't sound cliched at all.
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If you make it not a boarding school it would be good... if you make it in a non-realistic-fiction world it would help, too
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Dot get too close to Final fantasy though, with the modern and non modern mix there. But other wise it will work fine make it post-appocaliptic so the planet you choose civil is gone. i dunno just an idea
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You shouldn't worry too much about how similar it is to other books. Besides, the magic school idea has been done by a lot of authors, but as long as they make the plot line and characters original, it always works out fine. As long as your characters are original and the plot line is different, it shouldn't matter too much if there are a couple of similaries. Oh, and be very careful with your main character (for example, if she's an orphan with special powers none of her classmates have and she's beautiful, you have a problem). Just keep your characters in shape and maybe lose the boarding school, and it should be great.

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Um. It's a good idea. To tell the truth, the Harry Potter books were fun up to a certain extent, but after a while it got to be like being bludgeoned to death by a wet seal. We understand that Harry is the savior of the world (does not want to be the savior of the world/yet always wins). I do like your idea - what with the girl and France and all, but maybe you shouldn't make it a boarding school, you know? It takes a unique idea and makes it seem a little too Rowling-esque.

Just something to consider. Good luck! _/)

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I almost read that book in sixth grade..my brother is reading them, so I'll have to ask him what he thinks...

But I remember that the cover of Charlie Bone reminded me a lot of the covers of the Harry Potter books.
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Hmm...it does seem to be a lot like Harry Potter...epescially with the boarding school, young savior, and the magic. The fact that it takes place in France and partly in the U.S. makes me decide that it is sort of like Harry Potter, but not all the way.
I think you should turn it into a regular school. :)
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