All I have to say is... wow. I'm not quite sure what I'm looking at, but it sure confuses me! Very salvador dahli of you!
So, because this piece is so strange and interesting to look at, I can't really say what you could really improve on, here. Its so abstract, I don't know if really anyone can! I will say, though, that the colour, as always, is rather an interesting sight.
If, and this is a big if, that creature on the right is a human with wings, you might want to work on your forshortening and your proportions. It could give a lovely effect if such a thing was put into play. On the left, the girl appears to be crouching. When one crouches, the lower calve is almost blocked by the thigh. That and her arm is very, very long. Much too long to fit proportionally wise.
Other than that, I'm not sure really what I can say. I like that this is so random. Its definitly very different than anything I have ever seen before so its really hard to understand what you were trying to put across. So, if I sort of new the meaning, maybe, I could give a just opinion. Since I don't, I have no idea what to expect!
So, all in all, I will say its interesting! ~The.Dreamwalker
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
Whoh. WHOH. This is fricken crazy. Crazy cool. But crazy. I've never, and I am sincere in saying this, seen anything like it. Its is beutiful, but isn't what beautiful is described as. It is beautiful in its own, origanol, way. I'm not critting this because, well, I don't know how to. Great job.
Wow! That's really colorful! I'm kind of wondering what the white creature is supposed to be, but I like the girl's hair (It's purtty). May I ask what you used to color this?
Is this the one that went missing?? The art monster has returned the work! Sorta. Okay, sorry to clutter your review space. Heh. Well... I don't usually review things like this, because I don't know much about the real elements of art, I can only judge on how it looks in general. But since this is an abstract piece, all I'll say is that I love the colors.
Oh, I wish I was punk-rocker with flowers in my hair.
Hey, i like how ideas just seem to form, my art teacher does not seem to get that. I feel a bit lazy today, as I've been doing nothing but exams lately, so I'm going to give you a shorter than usual review. Firstly, i like the idea, i understand it to. it's hard to explain but i get what your drawing. I reminds me of harry potter when harry sees the voldemeort baby thing in 'king cross station' I would not go as far to say that it's like Salvidor Dali like another reviewer has but it does have a slight surrealist feel to it. The use of color is quite good, and interesting, I don't like the background much, it's just a little childish for me but then again that's me. The figure could defiantly use more work. You should refine this, it has great potential.
Hey I'm also confused.. I cant even figure out some of the media used here. I love each figure in isolation, but because i usually like to know whats going on in an artwork, Im not too sure about the composition. Heres a few tips: - Shade your kneeling figure - Limit your palette slightly. I feel that if you used red's and browns throughout the artwork, with high contrasts and some greys, it would look fantastic. - Put the chick on something; she looks a little odd, tooooo abstract, just floating. What if you had a chessboard, (brown and white) starting at the bottom and cracking up, crumbling completely befor the rainbow. - What would happen if you wrapped a chain around the rainbow? Try to find symbolism for every thing, and try to relate them to each other. Tie all the relations using the title. THis could work out splendidly I tend to lean more towards the EMO side of life when i see this work
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Wow. This INSANE... and I love it I really like the colours - The girl's hair is full of amazingness - and both of the people/things are really interesting.
Some sligtly critique-y stuff: the girl, she is sittig on NOTHING, I think there was a suggestion above. Also I think yu could do alot more with the ground and background, it seems a little like a couloring book (which is good, I just think you could add more or maybe make the coulors brighter) and I think the clouds could do with being a bit bigger
Other than that it was really good I really liked the vibrant colours and sligtly strange scene.
~Tinkem
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