Morgan's Lullaby

Your angelic, soft hair,
and your shimmering brown eyes.
Your sweet voice, flowing in the air,
was what made me realize;

There's more to tears than sadness,
and there's more to life than death. (This is my favorite part of the poem. There's something that just withholds so much truth about it.)
So don't cry, darling, that's madness.
Just let me hold you while you rest.

Feel the warmth of a timeless love
from these arms, as gentle as a dove.
Now lay your head upon my chest,
as whispering dreams, flow at their best.

There's more to tears than sadness,
and there's more to life than death.

So don't cry, darling, that's madness.
Just let me hold you while you rest.

Now lay your head upon my chest,
as whispering dreams, flow at their best.

Your angelic, soft hair,Good good, except soft doesn't quite go with angelic
and your shimmering brown eyes. Does brown really shimer?
Your sweet voice, flowing in the air,
was what made me realize; This flows a bit akward from the last line
There's more to tears than sadness,
and there's more to life than death.I really liked this combo of sadness and death
So don't cry, darling, that's madness. Akward rhythm to this line. Try " darling because that's madness"
Just let me hold you while you rest. Is this part of the last stanza? It doesn't flow with it so it doesn't make sense
Feel the warmth of a timeless love
from these arms, as gentle as a dove. So why did you go to AABB rhyme here? It was ABAB before?
Now lay your head upon my chest,
as whispering dreams flow at their best.