My Inspiration

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i really like this poem, however i think it could be longer, and not so rhymey. I think a little bit of rhyming in this poem is really good, but for it's length the rhyming gets a little repetitive.
écrire pour vivre - french
schrijf om te leven - dutch
scrivere per vivere - italian
生活への書き込み - japanese
write to live - english




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This is amazing, the rhythm and rhyme are absolutely perfect in the poem!
I think the meaning of the poem is very obvious: how you're in the middle of a writer's block, and then you meet someone who inspires you in many ways.
However, that doesn't make it any less powerful.
Beautiful poem. Keep writing :).




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--> wow! *clap-hands* you are truly great! :) So sure that if your "inspiration" read this- he/she will be so happy! *thumbs-up* Good job!
Every day is beautiful with a little arm stretch and a smile :)



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