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"This is our decision, to live fast and die young... Yeah it's overwhelming, but what else can we do? Get jobs in offices and wake up for the morning commute?
The models will have children, we'll get a divorce, find some more models; everything must run its course!
hey i really enjoyed this... the funny thing is that this is actually true, because that is what human kind does. i couldn't find much to complain about XD just watch grammer and stuff... keep writting. if you need a review pm me...
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Imagination is more important than knowledge. knowledge is limited, imagination encircles the world-Albert Einstine Never argue with an idiot. They drag you down to their level, then beat you with experience-Fool need a review? just PM me!
When I first saw this I was like 'oh gosh no please do not tell me someone has done a poem in this format again! But you definitely opened my mind to this style. It's a good, thought provoking poem, with just a trace of angsty after taste. No critiques, sorry I can't be helpful!
“If the person you are talking to doesn't appear to be listening, be patient. It may simply be that he has a small piece of fluff in his ear.” -Winnie the Pooh
