Nothing's gonna be okay

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Nothing's gonna be okay



Eyes watching, it’s in the fireplace,
An evil, burning face
Whispering, I know what you desire.
Before bursting in to fire.

Mouth laughing, it’s in the ice,
A mouth spitting lies
Promising, I know what you dream.
Before disappearing with the steam.

Hands grasping, it’s in the solid stone,
Ten dead fingers in cold bone
Writing, I know what you want.
Before breaking the enchant.

Thoughts attacking, it’s in my mind,
An old soul of the worst kind
Thinking, I know who you are.
Before cutting the scar.

My memories escape,
My thoughts loose their shape,
My lungs forget to breath,
My heart forgets to beat.

You’re playing, with me
Infiltrating my sight, can’t see,
Can’t think but I can feel,
But it can’t be real.

I hurt, I scream, I feel the pain,
Giving in to you, because I’m insane,
You say nothing’s gonna be okay,
Nothing’s gonna be allright.

Your evil eyes look in to mine,
Your lying mouth kisses mine,
Your cold hands touch mine,
Your thoughts become mine.

We’re both gonna die,
Together you and I.

And you ask:"It's hopeless, so why fight back?
Why try when your future is black?"

And I say;
"Because I'm human, it's what we do.
We fight, we hope, we're not like you."
Last edited by Demoness on Tue Feb 22, 2011 6:02 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"Some say the world will end in fire;
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice." - Robert Frost




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W.O.W!!! I wish I could write like you, this is just pure talent. Keep writing!!!
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"Oh, children, children, why are you following me?"
"We couldn't sleep," said Lucy - and then she felt sure that she need say no more and that Aslan knew all they had been thinking.

The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe by C.S. Lewis.




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Aoow, thank you so much! I'm sure you're a really good write as well.. xD
"Some say the world will end in fire;
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice." - Robert Frost




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This is a really great poem :) I love when people picture love so dark and beautiful as the way you did here. The only critique I have is you spelled the word "lose" as loose, ha ha.. But if that's the only thing I can think of to critique then you know you have something really special here. Keep writing poetry!
Paul is my little, evil, yellow bundle of joy.




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Thanks you! Hah.. I´don't know how many times I've spelled Lose as Loose... guess I just think it looks better with a double O.. ^^
"Some say the world will end in fire;
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice." - Robert Frost



Darkness cannot drive out darkness: only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate: only love can do that.
— Martin Luther King Jr.