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hello! I've been looking through the forums and your reviews are popping up everywhere! :) I would love love love if you could possibly critique my poem? :) I'm new to YWS, but am having so much fun, already! I've always enjoyed writing poetry/short stories, but now I have a place to become a better writer and improve my prose. I'd adore some good feedback!!! :)

this is it

thanks!




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Hey Kendallelise :) Your review is done. Next review?
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I would really appreciate a review on my poem:
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Thanks so much!
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Your review is done, Devan. :)

Anyone else?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Hey there! *high five*
Could you review my poem, please? It's not long, but I would like an opinion. Thanks!
viewtopic.php?t=89852
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Hello Polinkacreations, your review is done, hope it helps! :)

Is anyone up for a review from me?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
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Could you review what I have done so far of my novel? It's fantasy, just for you to know. Chapter one is found here. Chapter two is here. Thank you! =D




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Alphonso Fernandez, your review is done. :) Sorry it took me so much time. Anyone else up for a review?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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I wouldn't mind a review on my piece as well, please?
Voil'a monsieur theotherone (if you are female don't take offence, I say this all the time..)

> A poem please : http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 17&t=92055
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Written In Stone, it's done! So... Will someone ask for another review? :)
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Hello,

Would love a review on this if possible,

viewtopic.php?f=6&t=92344

Thanks, much appreciated! :)



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