The Other Reviewer. :)

theotherone · 2011-02-17T22:26:45Z

Hello everyone! I know there's a lot of people who offers their reviews... I'm one of them now. ;) My reviews normally consist in nitpicks and an overall impression on the story. I might also give you little tips for your plot, depending on your style. I will review (includes Short stories and novels): :arrow: Romantic :arrow: General Fiction :arrow: Art and Photography :arrow: Poetry I will consider reviewing (includes short stories and novels): :arrow: Fantasy :arrow: Fanfiction ( If I know the story it comes from.) :arrow: Non-fiction. (depends on what it is.) :arrow: Historical Fiction Don't even ask for me to review Science Fiction, because I will only read the first few sentence and give up. ;) Now, I don't think I missed anything... Please, give me some work! PS: If you ask me to review your novel, please tell me which chapters. I will be more then happy to review it all if you would like, but you have to tell me you want it all reviewed and be patient. I have a life outside of YWS after all. ;) -Other One

lilymoore

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Fri Jun 03, 2011 11:05 pm

lilymoore says... · Fri Jun 03, 2011 11:05 pm

Want a Poem?

Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.

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Sat Jun 04, 2011 5:33 pm

theotherone says... · Sat Jun 04, 2011 5:33 pm

Lilymore, your poem has been reviewed.

Anyone else needs a review?

Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise.

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Fri Jun 24, 2011 4:43 pm

Alliaaryn5665 says... · Fri Jun 24, 2011 4:43 pm

Hi,

Uhm, this is kind of random, but can you review anything and everything you have time for? If you can't, that's fine. :]

Farewell,
A.

You think you are any different from me,or yourfriends?Or this tree?If you listenhard enough,you canhear every living thingbreathing together.You canfeel everything growing.We are all living togethereven if most folksdon't act like it.We all havethe same roots,and we are allbranches of the sametree.

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Tue Jun 28, 2011 9:20 pm

theotherone says... · Tue Jun 28, 2011 9:20 pm

Hello A.

I did a few reviews, and the rest is coming soon, don't worry.

Anybody else is brave enough to ask for a review?

Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise.

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Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:28 pm

Jas says... · Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:28 pm

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That please?

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

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Wed Jun 29, 2011 5:39 pm

theotherone says... · Wed Jun 29, 2011 5:39 pm

Jas, I finished reviewing your short story. It's was really a good read.

Anybody else?

-Other One

Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise.

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Thu Jun 30, 2011 8:28 pm

Sins says... · Thu Jun 30, 2011 8:28 pm

Hey, theotherone!

Could you review a random part of my novel for me? I've recently edited it, so I'd like to get some fresh opinions. I know this is a bit of a big ask, so if you don't want to do it, that's totally fine. There's a brief summary at the top of the post though, so that should help you out if you are happy to take a look at it for me.

Here's the link: topic81113.html

Please and thank you!

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.