Deity

More practice with this particular style of drawing. I think the pencil drawing I did of this - before I re-inked it on the computer- looks better. If there are any mistakes you can spot, please tell me

Its so PRETTY! I love it, its so flowy. There are some issues though. Her left hand is not gripping the string handle properly and also on her right side you did not continue the string all the way through it just stopped and got cut off.
I love her hair, and her eyes and basically everything about this drawing I think it great.
Keep drawing,
FAF

Nice, I'm a bit tired right now so i won't go into detail.
1. is the proportion, her thighs are to long, the knees should be under the dress not start at the edge of the dress.

2. Her lower legs look good but maybe more definition between feet and leg would be good. Give her some ankles!

3. I like the flowy dress but the way she sits looks unnatural but kudo's or you for getting most of it right because it is hard to draw people sitting.

4. Her arms. Like the person above me said the hand and the arm needs to look like they are actually dripping the rope. Also continuing the rope on the other side might make it look better.

Continue with he great work!

This was very pretty. Like the others, I find some improvement could be applied to the left hand, the ankle-foot thing, the thighs being too long, and the cut off of the rope. Overall, very nice.

Hi again!

Once more a lovely drawing from you!

I love the dress, it's so poofy and fluffy and the ruffles are just awesome... the sleeves are also really cute ^^"
The fabric seems to fall quite naturally and doesn't look like it's falling where it shouldn't, which is obviously A Good Thing.
(though I agree with Jennya about the thighs)

Hair, once again, is amazing, and I love the flower bunches that she has in her hair. The little ringlets that she has are just so cute ^^"

I think the only real problem with the posture that people keep saying is that her arms should be behind the rope, not in front of it. This would make it look more like she is actually sitting on the swing, not floating in front of it and grabbing behind. If you think about how you sit on a swing, you would normally have your hands behind to grip it, right? So I think that if you just moved her arms behind the rope, and turned the left hand slightly so the fist goes around the rope (following the line of the rope)... oh, I'm not making sense.
.. hang on, I made something to help explain:

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Sorry for defacing your art, but hopefully that helps explain my ramblings a bit more? The rope and the gap left by the fist need to line up, basically, whilst at the moment the fist is at an angle.

Other than that, this is awesome! Proportions overall are really good and there's loads of detail in the face and clothing. You have a delicate way with lines that I really like

Oooh. I quite like this one. I just noticed one thing: shoulder-to-elbow length should be longer. Otherwise...it's so pretty. I'm all for 'realism', so the eyes and the delicateness are so epic. I know this is meant to be a review, but I can't come up with anything other than "work on the shoulder". Eh. Maybe try some color on some of these pieces, or try to do male forms? That would be cool.
Yeah.
*salutes* Carry on.

P.S. Love the ropes.
P.P.S. What is that wrinkle on her belly doing there? *raises eyebrows* Sorry. Just...it doesn't seem... Never mind.

While I prefer personally, hand-inked final copies, this is very nice. Its elegant, with a flowing softness in the curls and folds of her dress. However, the freeness I think you intended isn't there. The dress falls naturally, as if captured in a breeze, yes. But her hair doesn't respond. It just lays there, flat compared to her skirt. If you want a swinging sensation, since you do have two ropes obviously attached to something that's holding her up, let her locks flow to the side (in the same direction as the dress), with no real set layout. I also noticed that she looks midget-ish... Her legs are so tiny and frail compared to the rest of her body!

But these problems are easily fixed. When I'm working on people, I tend to go sit in the middle of somewhere very public and exposed with my sketch pad, and just watch the people around me. Watch how the move; sketch their dimensions - overweight, average, muscular, petite, anorexic... Take general sketches of everybody you see who might contribute to your various characters somehow! Keep these in a separate folder than the one you use for your primary sketch book, and refer to these pages while you draw. Time, and practice, makes perfect.

Keep up the good work, though!

First things first I have to tell you that I love it!! I liked the way it's simply black and white witha kind of blue background. The lines are very well defined which is something I usually tell people to work on but you have done everything very bold and it really adds effect to the picture. The drawing itself is amazing and you're clearly very talented with a peice of paper and a pencil! I have no criticism evrything about it's perfect in my eyes. Anyway well done and promise me you will keep drawing! From Me- CuteJackRussell

Awww so cute^^ Amazing job and still looking ^^ keep up the good work Happy Drawing
Soulkana<3

This one is really gorgeous. The texture and lines on her dress is really nice and her face in general. Of the pieces that I've looked at so far, this one seems to really stand out to me. One thing that I'm not liking as much with all of your pieces is that you reink them on the computer. It makes it look... less authentic? I think thats what I'm going for. It would be really great to see how you blend colors too =]