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back for some srange reason, I see you didn't take any of my advice :( it's kinda sad but... ho hum, it's up to you. Anyway, you changed amigo to friend - which IS better but completly throws off the rhyming scheme.

~Tinkem
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;'( please, my lump, he just needs HUGS <3
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