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MUCHO
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Tue Feb 08, 2011 3:52 am
MUCHO says... · Tue Feb 08, 2011 3:52 am
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"This is our decision,
to live fast and die young...
Yeah it's overwhelming,
but what else can we do?
Get jobs in offices and
wake up for the morning commute?

The models will have children,
we'll get a divorce,
find some more models;
everything must run its course!

Fated to Pretend
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Snoink
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Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:13 am
Snoink says... · Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:13 am
Woo! Going kind of Simon and Garfunkel there, aren't you? Reminiscent of "The Boxer"! :) Anyway, I think this would be a lot spiffier in the Lyrics forum, since you could totally get away with all the Lalas there, plus it would completely fit! Anyway, if you want me to move this, just bug me. :)
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

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MeanMrMustard
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Tue Feb 08, 2011 5:13 am
MeanMrMustard says... · Tue Feb 08, 2011 5:13 am
Very "Boxer" esque. But not, sort of. I want to see this as lyrics, changed to fit the standards of a song. Interesting in all Bolshevik.
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misstoria
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Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:46 pm
misstoria says... · Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:46 pm
I love the way it actually speaks to you when you read it. This really does belong in lyric form and in that form this could be really amazing. If you convert this to lyric form it would be quite amazing.
You are more than the choices that you've made, you are more than the sum of your past mistakes. You are more than the problems you create, You'v been remade.

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