New!!!! I've been on YWS for one day!!

I'm trying to improve my writing skills. I like writing poetry, short stories, and im currently writing a novel. I love music. I've written a few songs. I play flute. I read ALL the time. I love meeting new people, so feel free to comment on any of my writings good or bad.

Here is one of my older poems I don't think it's that good?


Who know you'd break my heart
You did your part
Now I've got to pick up the pieces
I need your kisses

I miss the way it use to be
You were my heart's key
What happened to us
You made me feel like a goddess
Now we're torn apart
Was it my fault ?

Will we ever be the same?
Whose to blame?
We may never know

jujubean05 wrote:I'm trying to improve my writing skills. I like writing poetry, short stories, and im currently writing a novel. I love music. I've written a few songs. I play flute. I read ALL the time. I love meeting new people, so feel free to comment on any of my writings good or bad.

Welcome to YWS!
I read all the time, too! It's funny... Oh, okay...I'll drop by your wall.