Girl 1

I tried to do a somewhat basic desgin to get porportions right, even though it is stylized. Reviews would really help, since I tried hard to get things correct. Any nitpicking would be immensly appreciated!

Really, really cute....
but gaahh!
Where are her feet?
*screams*
But really. lovely and very smooth coloration.
Good job!
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-jojo.

Oooooh... cool... I like this. The shadowing looks really good to me... and yeah, it's really smooth and pretty and cute!

Like JoJo said, she has no feet DX and, well, her hands are just sort of nubs... and the place where her pant legs touch at the bottom? I think it looks too much like it's conjoined, you know?

But that's it! Good job XD

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Tabby

I, I really don't like this one. There are multiple errors everywhere.

First off: Where are her....FEET!!! I mean, I get that the pants are long, but feet should show from under the pants.

Also, the shadowing is pretty bad. It is very sparatic, and isn't how shadows...well..work.

Also the hair is REALLY big.