Summer Girl

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This I did a while back... when it was cold... and I was dreaming of the green and grassy summer. *sigh* This has been a long winter. Reviews are welcome :)
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Lovely picture.I quite like the color and the feel of it. The face is quite nice. to it seems amine and yet at the same time not. I only have a few issues. The girl just doesn't look right. Like shes lying in an awkward position. It's mainly the right side if her body, her arm seems twisted the wrong way. The head is placed properly. Try taking pictures of others lying down might help. Also work on the shoulders and the hands, which are the hardest part to draw.
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Ug, this is a bit hard to review. There is no 'true' design flaws, but It is drawn poorly. I mean, you got the attributes right, but the attributes aren't that good. All I can really tell you is to practice a bit more. This has potential, but It just didn't work out. Good job though.




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I like this drawing, seriously good job. I think that the angle that the girl is sitting in could be better. But I really like it. I do no lie.




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Gives me a feel of summer! <3 All I've got to say is that the arm she's raising (?) looks a bit awkward, like "what's she doing?" but it's not as bad as some people say D:< Overall, it's very nice. I like her hair.




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Hey,
It's been a while since I've reviewed any of your stuff and i have a feeling Ive seen this before. I'm a bit tired and I'm in a odd mood so i will keep it quick. The colors aren't great, everything seems kind of tame and there is no really stand out colors, I'm just writing this because everything else you do is quite different. The face is generally well done but 'ts alignment on the next isn't great. Nor are the positing of her arms, it doesn't look like she is in a natural position. Although there is improvement on everything else. The shading isn't to bad either. Her breast and ribs are highly un-natural. But i don;t think your aiming for real. Just get rid of that awkwardness in the figure. Try lining down yourself and getting someone else to take a picture.

oh i have already review it, well it doesn't hurt to do it again.
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Great drawing! There's really not much to review here. There's only two things that seem to bother me. It's just the chest area and the way the hand is set up. The chest area seems a bit...weird? (Not normal would probably be a better word to say.) The left hand (or the right hand, if you are looking in a perspective way) is drawn not as great as the rest of the body.
Other than that, I love the way you color your drawing. It has a lot of details when it is drawn. I also like the hair, especially the hair. Your drawings are amazing! Keep drawing! [:
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BlackSheep, something I've been noticing lately is that your hands aren't very good. You should really look up some hand-drawing tutorials online (because I'm terrible at it too, and I don't have any good advice) to up your skill level. :)
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