Not Sure, Help Me?-FIXED

This is some stuffs from my human collection of drawing. Help me. I can't tell how it's going. Excuse the roughness of it. It's hard for me to draw people yet.

heres a cut off from photobucket...I'm not really sure what happened :/ I'm still learning.
Give me some feedback, thanks

It's kinda hard to see but what I do see looks good! I can't draw humans. Not non-cartoon ones.
So to me, this is very good! Keep it up!

Hi, Clever. Jashie here for a random quick review. Ummm...first, you have to resize that (flahsback at the time I didn't resize my work. LOL) Are you new? If you don't know how to resize stuff, you can go to shrinkpictures.com. It's a n awesome free picture resizer site that's easy to use. Anyway, moving on!

This is really nice. I love you soft lines, which is the sign of a true artist. HAHA... but, I think the baby's face is a bit disproportional, it looks like it's shrunk in. And you had been lazy with the right foot (left of the drawing)! Haha! Gotcha. LOL kidding. This is a nice job. Can't say anything more.

~ Jash ♥

cleverclever,

This is so cool! I absolutely suck at drawing non-anime humans... But anyway, I just have a few suggestions - which you can fully ignore if you'd like, due to that last statement of mine.

1. I think if you added some crease lines on the pillow expanding from the baby's head then it would add some depth to the drawing... I could be wrong, so don't take my word for it!

2. The baby's right arm (left side of the drawing) looks oddly detached from its body... I'm not sure why.

3. Perhaps you could change some of the shading on the baby's face... It gives it an oddly wrinkled look. This may just be me being crazy, though.

As you can tell, I'm hesitant to give you full constructive criticism... I don't want to tell you something wrong! So take my review with a grain of salt... But anyway, I like this a lot!

Keep up the good work and I hope I helped!

~ Moonlight

Edit: I forgot to tell you that I absolutely love the koala bear! ^_^

Aww, so cute! It's going great, and you're proportions are perfect! Keep drawing it and darken the lines. Aw mom's calling.

Wow, this is pretty good! Although I only have one piece of criticism. The baby's body is almost perfect, but on his/her face the cheeks look too big to me. It looks like the baby has chubby cheeks. I love how you threw in the teddy bear, it looks so good. This is way better than anything I can draw and it's really good. Great job.

Tyler.

Hey, this is pretty neat. I myself have only ever drawn a baby once and it was pretty hard but it's good to see someone pulling it off. I'm a bit tired to i will be quick.

1. Stronger lines, Everything seems Kind of flat. You must accentuate certain parts of the picture to make it come alive. Someone said soft lines are the sign of a true artist, not true.

2. Personally i think the proportion hear is pretty dam good. The part near the bear is a little weird though. Also work a little more on the clothes, the look a little puffy and hands but the feet are so cute! Also the right cheek has a double line thing, get rid of this. Makes the cheek look weird. I would also add more to the eyes to make them pop, they are looking a little bland right now.

I struggled to find things to write about. This is very good work indeed!