We were at the beach with MY NEW CAMERAA!! I love it ANYWAY.
Original-The Derelict Pier
Edited- The Derelict Pier
The Glittery Beach Groin
Through the Pillars
God's Hand
The Branches
Please review/comment :3
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Hey Ava! These are really good, I'm surprised you only have one comment! But now I'm here to give you a lovely review! Weeeeeee! Lets get started!
Original-The Derelict Pier- So I really love this one, it's got a really beautiful gloomy feeling that's just perfect. The way the light from the clouds slant seem to draw my attention to the figure, which is just wonderful. Everything about this picture is wonderful, I just adore it.
Edited- The Derelict Pier- This I don't like quite as much, it just looks edited, and I feel like it loses some of it's character.
The Glittery Beach Groin- Odd name for it, not sure if that's a typo or not...? Anyway it's a pretty good shot, but the only thing is nothing really jumps out at me...it doesn't really wow me.
Through the Pillars- This one is defiantly one of your best ones on here, it's my favorite after the first one. It reminds me of the Great Depression, and I like the effect you used on it. The only thing that bothers me is that the pillars aren't straight.
God's Hand- Meh, I really don't like this one, looks edited and really pretty boring. There's no real focus in this photo.
The Branches- This one's probably my favorite, but the only little problem I have with this is that my attention goes to that green branch in the middle, and not the girl.
Overall you're a fantastic photographer, and if you ever want another review, just post in my WRFF or PM me.
Keep it up!
~Hope
"I'd rather be hated for being who I am, then loved for who I'm not."
Hello there. These look really great. You must have a pretty good camera.
Original-The Derelict Pier This looks really good, I love the silhouettes. However that bright spot in the corner is just a bit too bright in my opinion. You could darken that part or crop it. I'm not sure if you wanted that little girl there or what, but she just seems a bit out of place. If she was supposed to be there, it might look better if she was in focus. If not, well, make her move.
Edited- The Derelict Pier That looks really cool, but I think it's a bit over-edited. It's very grainy and too saturated, and looks very unrealistic. But unrealistic isn't always a bad thing.
The Glittery Beach Groin LOVE this one. It's my favorite. The tones, perspective, focus, everything is just right.
Through the Pillars Love this one too. My second favorite. The only thing is it's very crooked, and I think that takes away from it a bit.
God's Hand The colors in this are wonderful, but again, it's crooked. Everything else about it looks good though.
The Branches As is, I don't really like this one, but it has potential. My main problem is the person behind the branches, and that big branch right in the middle that's all blurry. It also seems a bit over saturated, because of the girl's pink face.
Wow, now I'm reading the previous review and it's so different from mine... interesting...
Overall great job, and I'd love to see more of your work. Keep shooting! ~KG
