Strawberry Sundae

McDonald's has a new ice cream flavor now and I wanted to try it out! Yum! xD

By the way, I didn't look good in the original picture so I edited it xD:



I don't know if it's good though.

What do you think? It was my older sister who took this pic with my cellphone, and I actually wanted her to just take the picture of the ice cream only, not me and the ice cream! lol And, I can't actually crop it well so I didn't pursue it.

Well, here's the original pic:

Well um, I have nothing to say. That's because the pictures are broken and won't show up on the page. If you can fix that, let me know and I'll review it for you.

Tyler.

The edit looks quite nice, except that the ice cream is so blurred. I suggest that, if you have Photoshop or a similar program, that you crop out the ice cream and cone and put them on a separate layer, maybe sharpening the ice cream a touch so it doesn't look so grainy. As it stands, while the background is much more colorful and "fun" in the edit, and the silhouette makes the whole picture more dramatic, the ice cream itself looks not so great. Which is a shame since it is the focal point.

Ok, the ice cream doesn't even look like ice cream in the first picture, but I'm not worried about the original. I'm here to critique the second one. I think this is pretty good for a cell phone picture. I like how you changed the color of yourself and the ice cream so that all you could see was your outline and the red ice cream. And then you have the background which is pretty good. An overall good picture.

Tyler.