Ohhh wow. These were amazing. I loved them all. Especially the first one, I really wasn't expecting the last line. (: I found nothing that needs improving on at all: the drawings with their roughness makes them all the more charming and lovable, the dialogue was funny and spoke volumes about the characters' personalities and they're all believable and well ... brilliant. You really have talent, keep it up and I hope to see your cartoons in the papers. (:
~EmmaJane
Your = Possession. Your shoes are so sweet! You're = Omission. You're quite strange...
If you are confused about which to put, simply say in your mind "you are" and see if that fits the sentence. If not, you are looking for your.
Love them all! The colors are great, and the comics themselves are hilarious.
You must be swift as the coursing river, With all the force of a great typhoon, With all the strength of a raging fire, Mysterious as the dark side of the moon.
Hilarious. The style is perfect, and the characters are very believable. They totally remind me of people I know!:D I especially loved the "remember" one.^^ Great work! Much loves, Bunny
"I can have oodles of charm when I want to." --Kurt Vonnegut Jr.
Hey these are really good! I was laughing hysterically after reading way one. My favorite was the ironic math board one. The colors you used were nice and bright. How long did it take you to do them? -Hope
Books are the ultimate Dumpees: put them down and they'll wait for you forever; pay attention to them and they always love you back. -John Green (An Abundance of Katherines)
Hello there, Goa. I'm Jashie, and I'm doing random quick review. Here it goes...
These are so funny. Cool. You've got a style with your drawing. In the Endless Loop, the middle picture, I think the balloon dialogue should exchange places; so "Hey, Sean..." would be read first before the "whatser....." and it'll sound funnier.
I have a couple of tips for you:
Tip #1
When you draw, try and separate the blocks of drawings; because sometimes, I had to look twice at the drawings before getting the separate...um...drawings.
Like in this strip:
Spoiler
I know you have your owns style. But having space between drawings will make your story clearer.
Tip #2
GET A TABLET...
And by tablet, I don't mean drugs. (:lol:) I mean the one for digital drawings.
Seriously. Get one. You're great, you're awesome. Your stories are funny. Just get one and make more of these. You must be thinking now, How will that help me? Well, one thing: digital drawings are easier. You don't have to erase anything. You just adjust a brush's opacity, dab (I like using that word) on a color, and viola! PLUS, your production of these comical strips will be faster.
So yeah... these were awesome, I repeat.
~ Jash ♥
“I believe in Christianity as I believe that the sun has risen: not only because I see it, but because by it I see everything else.”
I can NOT draw with a Tablet. I just can't. It feels unnatural and it takes me twice as long. I love my pro-markers and I love drawing by hand. Also Tablets cost over $100 which is $100 more than I have. My old one didn't work well with my PC and I don't have a real computer, only three PCs. My PC is also small, and I wouldn't be able to see the full extent of what I'm drawing the whole time.Tablet drawing is by no means easier.
I do know I need to separate the panels more but I probably won't use boxes because I like being weird like that. I'll make the lines thicker but I don't like boxes. Not a clue why, maybe because I have limited space for drawing and boxes take up too much room.
I will separate the panels more, though, but there's no way I'm drawing with a tablet. (Which is ironic, considering how long I'm on the computer every day)
Also, while I'm writing, I will have another one up tomorrow! I just didn't have time to post it today because I forgot to write down the dialog and it took me close to an hour to remember it.
haha these were cool! my favorite was the one with the painting and she goes "whats wrong with it?" Some of them i didnt get. Maybe its just me though. haha post more(:
Hi! I love you comic stip! You are so talented and creative! How did you do it? Markers, pencil, crayon, the computer?!?! Wow...you got skillllllz! Good job, you have amazing talent, keep it up!
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