Tiki and the girl

These are some drawings which i did in the past week... I used my new colors for it...

1. Tiki



2.Henrietta
I was very disappointed when i drew this. I thought that it was not up to the mark but a friend of mine told that it was good and that made my day.



3.Dorthy
She is a girl with super powers. She can generate force fields.



Hope you people like these...

I like these a lot, very quirky and original. The first one is my favorite, the lines are good and the colors are great. I also love his fat little stomach!
The second one is also good and I like it, though it's not up to the same quality as the first. She just seems happy. The only thing I didn't care for was the shadowing beneath her feet. At first glance I thought it was a space rocket or something. The coloring just seemed a little harsh.
The third one is alright, nicely drawn but it just didn't seem to have the funny originality that the other two had.
Altogether great drawings
~day

Hey!

All these drawings are so cute - they're all so original! You can see their personalities instantly, and they all seem to be somehow endearing in their own ways.

Tiki - I like him - especially his odd little pot belly, hehe - but the brown arm seems to be a bit odd. It's like he had bad sunburn on one arm and the other arm was fine. Next time, perhaps you should try shading in a little brown into the peach colour to show darkness or distance, instead of merely colouring in his arm a different colour.

Henrietta is so cute! Her eyes are really well drawn, and she looks like something from a comic book. I don't like the shadow, simply because it isn't very well defined towards the back of the shadow. Also, her socks (?) look odd being pink instead of red or blue or black; they clash with the other colours in the picture. However, I agree with your friend; she's so awesome!

Dorthy is cool as well. She looks like a character from Kim Possible in my opinion. I like the bubbles, but they seem to be a little light - maybe try defining them more next time.

Altogether, you're an awesome and original drawer!

Hello there.

1. This one, I have to say I was a little bit confused for the first few seconds because the two sides are not the same color, which I now know it was meant to be that way. I know, I'm slow sometimes, but just bear with me.
After that fist confusion though, I liked it, and the meaning I could see in it.

2. This one is pretty as well, like all of your drawings that I've seen. The shadow beneath her, though, as Day mentioned is a little bit weird. Maybe just take it off? And the little hearts on her hat... The colors seem a little bit weird to me. A color with less punch in it, like a soft yellow, which would work nicely with the red you've used. Or, if you still want something to contrast with the red, you could put blue, which is red's complimentary color, and therefore is going to make both colors pop without seeming weird to our eye.

3. Another girl! Yay. I like it also, but the fingers look a little bit weird too, on either hand. (Yes, this is the perfectionist side of me... What can I say, I have to give you criticism ) Anyways, I don't have anything bad to say, really...

Great job!

-Other One

Hiya

I really like the strange body proportions of Tiki. It's hard enough to draw something proportionally correct, and even harder to change that and make it look good and not just deformed! The only critique I have is that the background can be a lot more interesting. Perhaps make a whole scene behind him or even making it one solid color would make your other colors pop more.

For the second drawing, I really like the red and black colors, but the purple and pink felt a little offputting. For some reason the red and purple reminded me of the Red Hat Ladies (if you know what they are). That's really the only complaint I have. I would've just used different colors for those parts.

The third one is very cute! I love how it has a comic feel to the art. The girl looks genuinely happy and super-heroic I love the pink scarf. She kind of reminds me of Kim Possible...

I liked these pictures, but I have some questions about the first one. Why is half of his body black, when half his body is white? And it appears that he has two colors of hair. Is that true, or is the orange part a part of his body? Other that that the first one is great. The second one I really liked. I liked how she had one style and everything was red, even her eyes. And I loved how she had a purple shadow! The second one was marvelous. And the third one I very much enjoyed. I would have to say it was my favorite. This is a classic way of drawing, and I like it. The scarf stands out, and I like her style. This is an overall great collection of art. Keep drawing!

Tyler.

Methinks you're one of the best artists on this site, I love your work and all of its uniqueness

Tiki- this guy is amazing. The point of light though is a little bit confusing, though. I think maybe you should draw in a campfire or something? Other than that, I love the colors. And how disproportionate his body is it's very comical and gives him great character.

Henrietta- she's very reminiscent of your previous works, which I also love really my only nit-pick with her is the pink lines on her socks. I think they should be either red or black, something that matches the color-scheme that you have going here.

Dorthy- This chick, I really like. She seems like a real BAMFin' girl which is always a good thing, to me anyway. She's very different compared to what I've seen of your other drawings. I like her clothes, and her shoes are amazing and the pink scarf is very nice. As for her hair, I like it but I also wonder what it would look like in a shorter cut? Hmmmm....

So that's all I have to say. In all: very clean lines, vibrant colors, and very unique styles. I applaud. **applauds**

Stay shmaweshome!

Hahah these are cute! My favorite one is the third. I don't know why you would be disappointed with the first. I think it was quirky and very creative. You certainly have an original style and I like how you make thhat work. It makes your drawings jump off the page. Keep it up!

Hey Ehte!

I finally got here lol

I especially like these three picture that you've posted because they show such different styles of drawing, which shows how versatile you are as an artist.

My favourite is obviously Henrietta! But I am a bit biased because you drew her for me and she's the main character from my novel but I just love the way that you've captured her but also managed to put your own stamp on her. She's just so cute and I love her so much and am forever grateful to you for drawing her for me!

My second favourite is Tiki. He has so much character and life in him. So much so that I would love to hear a story about him, he seems like a fascinating character. I love how you've drawn his body, it's so funny.

Dorthy reminds me of Kim Possible for some reason. I think that's maybe why she is my least favourite because she reminds me of another cartoon and I think the first two are much more original in style. However I still think she is very good and I like what she is wearing.

As always I love your drawings and your style! Keep it up!

Bex x

Hey,
In general your pictures where very good. I loved the tiki one you are not a bad cartoonist.I will try to breif

1. In general i really loved this piece, the style is original and i love the little pot belly. The only thing i can say is that the color is a little messy, try using the pencils differently. Also the spearhead looks funny, but that's just me.

2. The shadow looks funny, its quite unnecessary. It nice but lacks the spark the first one has.

3. The way you have draw this is very good. Pretty much everything looks right but is suppose you could have done the force field bubble differently, it looks odd in pencil next to all the marker and does not look 'cartoonish'.

I also suggest learning how to use photo shop or something like that I have a feeling you could go very far with the proper tools.