Last Words

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It’s darker here than anywhere in my life
I could be pricked in bittersweet rose gardens
My tongue could be caught on rough salt beauty ocean waves
I could bathe I glitter-sour sweat
But I’m beating days out here, instead
I’m wrapping my chocolate,
Still in idle form,
Because I’m saving this passion
(this 1-2-3 rush)
Just for you

The haunts, now, are seeping toward me
The lips of the hollow I’ve carved out
Are licking inward
I could brush off red ribbed salvia
Clear the stains of marrow stretching screams
With a wish, closed eye, face turned blind
I’d blink your ill fates and Octobers away
But enchantment never sat
With non-believers

So my sacrifices for the
Dabbled poet’s savvy skin
Are scarring deeper, marking surer
But I still cannot give in
For the rhythm still is beating
And the inertia drags me, speeding
I’m rushing forward, racing meaning
Short-lived, but full of rhyme and reason
The chocolate’s melted now and I am
Most literarily
Dying for the words to sing
Because, in two short seconds
I’ll be voiceless
And stuck in the darkest part of life
Carpe Diem.




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i like it, but the beat isn't that regular; it doesn't fit.



I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights