My Artwork-Lucan Mercer

So, this is the character from my and coco*'s work-in-progress, co-written novel, "The Demon Brothers". As the title suggests, his name is Lucan Mercer.



Tell me what you think? And suggest ideas on how to make the image quality better? Or not...

Hi there- so this is really good!

I love the expression that you gave him and the way you use your lines. I would watch your proportions though- I noticed that they're a bit off in the ratio of heady to body and arms to body. They're both a bit small. Also, your shading is a bit messy, and the legs are a little sloppy as well.

Also, you can resize your image so that we don't have to scroll about to find your artpiece. You can crop off the sides to center your drawing with a simple editing program. Here's a link explaining how to resize in the future: post668672.html?hilit=resizing%20how%20to%20resize#p668672

Overall, great job. I would work on proportions, clean up your shading, and resize, but this is really good. Keep drawing!

-Coral-

That is awsome! I think the hair should be a little more scruffier, but the face, PERFECT I see you've even drawn a bit of the tattoo, yay!

It's not perfect. But the expression in the face is amazing very realistic and the height of the body in proportion to everything else.I like the colors as well. But I think it's a little scruffy, not a lot, just a little. Still I like the general style of it. Very good I really liked it.

Well Done
From Me

not bad
I would suggest buying some inking markers that way when you want to color your artwork the pencil led doesn't mix with the colors.

Not bad, the face was quite good but the body was out of proportion. I suggest looking and study real people so you can get the proportion right. Everything else will fall into place after that. Also invest in paints or markers, its worth the money. never the less good job, you really did capture the face very well.

This was pretty good, but I have some complaints. The body is out of proportion, and I think you should fix it. Also, his skin is gray, and gray skin looks weird. You have to do a lot of sliding to see he whole body, so I think you should make the picture smaller. Although he does look like a human, and that's good. Just apply these and it will be a good picture.

Tyler.