Hello! If you could, I would love for you to review this: topic76997.html I'm sorry it's really long... Anything helps though. It's kind of general fiction as of now, I'm not really sure which direction I'm going to take it in.
Thanks!! -Once
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Thanks for the review! It was really helpful -the word scow was meant to be slow *stupid typos!! - If you can review the next chapter I just posted it topic77898.html
Hey Aunt Spit! If you have the time, I'd like some feedback on this. Thanks!
There are two kinds of folks who sit around thinking about how to kill people: psychopaths and mystery writers. I'm the kind that pays better. ~Rick Castle
Hey, could you review this: novel.php?id=1228 I have a lot more written, I just haven't posted it yet...I'd appreciate it TONS if you could review! Thanks SO much!
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Hey I was wondering if you'd be interested in reading the beginning of my novel, because of your interest in fantasy. Its in the advanced critiques but i have the first three chapters posted there as well, and as publishers ask to look at your first three or so chapters i'm extra concerned over those. By all means, though, read only as much as you want and take your time with it, as i understand your busy and its a bit long. Thanks a million! topic70200.html
If there's a book you really want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it.~Toni Morrison
It is written in m life-blood, such as that is, thick or thin; I can do no other~ Tolkien
If you have the time, I'd like some feedback on 
