Man with Glove

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Alright, so I tried to do a picture that included elements of ALL MY WEAKEST AREAS! Clothes, hands (i gave up on that and gave him a glove!) shading, and arm/shoulder porportions. I think I'm improving, but I can tell that there are still a lot of things wrong with this. Help, anyone? :/
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It's very good, but I'll give you a few tips. A bit more of a chin would've been good, and a sharper elbow. You did really good with the clothes, and the shading is realistic too! I didn't see many issues other than the neck and elbow. I really like how you expressed emotion in his face.
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I would agree with the previous post but one thing, where the chin is, you need to actually elongate the neck to give room for the chin to take proper form. :) The coloring and drawing is very nice.




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I'm going to partially cheat on this review and say what those guys ^ up there said. Also, where's his other arm? And you did great on the clothing, but i think the coat could use more ruffles and maybe even a few straps and buckles just to give more of a badass factor ;)

Other than that, this is great!! Let me know when you post more artwork, I adore it all!! :)
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Since I love all your art, I feel compelled to review this. This is very good, but I have one thing that I would change. Like Funky said, you could make his chin a little more noticeable. But this is amazing! How long have you been an artist? Because this is amazing, along with every other one of your works. What do you use to draw these? Everything looks so real. You have a tendency to make everything one color, so nothing clashes. I should try that. When I color, all I get is mush. But you know how to do everything right and everything realistically. Your work is most likely the best I have seen on this site. Your best critiquing friend.

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This man with glove is really good. I sometimes wish that I was focused enough to draw that good. I really like it.




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This one is interresting. There are a few errors I can spot, however.
~The chin! Where is the chin? I personally love my chin, and would die without it :P
~The neck? It seems like this area didn't get work into it. Hmph
~The arms cross in a weird way. It seems like he doesn't have a left arm at all.

Good job.




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Hey, good to see you trying stuff out! I'm a bit lazy today so i will be brief. Generally i agree with that the others have said. more chin, more neck, elbow needs to be sharper and more shading on the elbow would be nice. The glove also looks a bit weird and his hand is quite big to me. Need to fix his collar, looks like he is wearing a turtle neck but well done on the rest of the clothes.
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