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telll me what you alll think x

Hmm... The picture is pretty blurry, but from what I can see it seems nice. It would make a really cool tattoo or wall-hanging. =]

From what i can make out, it's really nice.
Is there, by any chance, a more clear depiction so that we can give a better review.
It's a little blurry.
Unless you are looking for a review on the picture.O_o?
( I'm focused, lol)

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-jojo.

This looks like a tattoo-ish design, and it's pretty cool. Even if you weren't making a tattoo the style is a lot like it and I have a technique that can help you get both sides the exact same.

1. First, fold a piece of paper in half that is thin enough to see through when held up to light.

2. Draw half of your design on one half.

3. Fold the page over that half so the back of the paper is now over your design.

4. Use sunlight or a torch under a glass table or tablemat to shine the previous design through the paper. Trace this design onto the page facing you.

5. Straighten out your paper and trace the design from the back of the paper onto the front where you first drew.

6. Ta-da! A symetrical tattoo-style design. You can then trace this design onto other paper etc.

I hope this method is helpful to you because the only thing I really saw 'wrong' with your picture was that it wasn't symetrical. Sure, you could use a better camera, but we all have our faults

~Love, Durrs

I like the design. Looks like it could be a tattoo or symbol for...something. I'm sure you've gotten a lot of this, but my main critique would have to be how blurry it is. It's a bit difficult to give a proper review when it's like that. Other than that, though, it's great.

This one is blurry so its hard to give a review.... You better take another clear picture of your art and post it here....
And as much as i can see its good but it seems as if the right side is a bit different than the left one is it just me....
Keep up the good work...
PM me for anything...

It's kind of plain, unless it was meant for a tattoo design. It's not totally symmetrical, and you should try to make the lines as bold and dark as you can get them since it is one solid color.

i love the pice of work i could see it as a tattoo

I have seen alot of tribal work before but this is rely good i like the lines and the shape of it
it is abit blurry but that is nothing to worry about as it is rely good

that only tip i would gove is to make your lines abit sharper and make it abit more evan but i doo like that way it looks

keep up the good wark samprice