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Scene from the past~

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The scientist peaked through the curtain and servayed the large crowd. "Good," He mumbled with pleasure; with all of the people, the auction aught to go well.

At that moment, the man on stage finished his speech and stated, "And now, without further ado, Dr. James R. Cane!" That was his que. James smiled behind the curtain and straightened his white coat; this was it. Beside him a small child -about ten years of age- stood quietly and obediently at his elbow. Snatching the child's metallic arm, the doctor ordered it to follow him, and then marched proudly on stage, sure that the kid would do as it was told.

Loud applause welcomed the scientist and his prodigy as they both entered. All eyes were trained on the man as he leaned forward, into the microphone. "Ladies and Gentlemen, I give you the world's most brilliant robot! I have confidence in announcing that this child before you is, in fact, the best." Doctor James gestured to the child, and the audience, once again, cheered loudly. "Smile," the man mumbled the order out of the side of his mouth. And the child did what it was told; just like it had done for every other command in its life.

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Mechanoids~

Mechanoids; part human, part robot. They were once fully human, until a group of scientists stole them away -when they were very young- and experimented, rearranged, and toyed with them until they were something completely different.

The scientists' idea was to make the smartest robots on the face of the earth. Everyone knows that the human being is the most intelligent creature on the planet; add a couple of super powered, mechanical parts and you have yourselves an incredible being. Of course, there's always the problem that the creation will be smart enough to question its orders. So, Doctor James R. Cane invented the obedience chip. It's a chip that is plugged into the Mechanoids' brain that forces them to obey every command given them.

It took many years, much money, and many deaths of children for the scientist to reach success, but victory was finally theirs. They had created the worlds most successful robot.


Each Mechanoid takes about four years to be completed.
When the scientists add a robotic part to the child's body, there needs to be a constant supply of oil, and a connection to the brain, to keep it going. Thus the scientists add many wires from the brain to the robotic part; also oil flows in the blood. Oil replaces water in every part of the body; they cry oil, they sweat oil, they bleed oil.

All Mechanoids are created differently, and for different purposes. Some military serving ones might have rocket-boots for feet, or a machine-gun hand. Whereas house keeping ones would have dusters-and-rags popping out of their hands, or a microwave stomach ( XD idk). There are many different kinds.

Although every Mechandoid is unique, they all have some basics: They all have oil pumping through there vanes, an obedience chip, wires that connect their brain to their robotic parts, they are all magnetic, and they have a serial number tattooed on their left shoulder.

But, even with all of the great things, the Mechanoids have some defects: with all of the oil in them, they are extremely flammable, and they conflict to water. Nothing is perfect.

Another scene of the past (but closer to the present)~

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Dr. James sat at his desk and rubbed his temples; things were not going as planned. A small knock at the door allowed him to sigh, "come in."

The handle turned and the door opened to another man in a white coat; a college named Dr. Wyhit. "China denied?" the man asked, hoping that his information was incorrect.

But the doctor in the chair nodded his head. "China, Russia, The White House, and all rest, the only one we haven't heard from is Australia. No one will take them." The two gentlemen were discussing the sales of, what they once thought, their greatest achievement: the Mechanoids. Everyone was excited for awhile, and some of the robots even sold, but now the sales had decreased to zero. It had taken very much money for the scientist to create the robots, and even more to perfect them, with the addition to the coasts of the oil that the Mechanoids needed to be supplied with everyday; the scientist were broke and needed to sell their merchandise, but no one was buying.

Dr. Wyhit sighed, "James, we've lost money, lots of it. And we're losing more everyday. If we keep up this way, we won't have enough money to continue with our other experiments; we'll have to shut down the lab. We need to sell Mechanoids or ditch them."

But James wasn't so willing to give up his dream, "If we just do some tweaking, give them some up-dates, surely they'll sell. People will buy them--"

"James."

The scientist looked away and sighed. Just then, the phone on his desk started to ring, the name on the computer flashed 'The Government of Australia'. The doctor lunged for the phone and pressed it against his ear. "Hello?"

The man standing watched his friend's face as he listened to the phone; it went from hopeful, to unbelief, to discouragement. Finally with a quiet, "Yes. Thank you. Good day," he hung up and turned to him. Shoulders slumped, he said with regret, "Ok, unplug them."

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With those orders, all of the Mechanoids were detached of their obedience chip, put in a box, and thrown away. When the scientist unplugged them from their chip, the expected them to die, -and most of them did- but the stronger, more humanoid ones survived. (note: Although, the striping of their chip did erase some of their memory. They still have some feelings and some deja vo's of their past, but real, solid memory is gone.)

So, the survivors wake up to find themselves dumped in one of America's largest junkyard.

Plot~

You're a Mechanoid. You wake up to find yourself in a junkyard in New York. You and your remaining 'family' have to find a way to survive in the outside world; trying to fit in with the rest of the people and worrying about your next meal.

You dress yourself in the clothes that you find in trash bags around the junk yard; build yourself a club house out of random pieces of junk; and eat from a nearby gas-station. Maybe you'll have to go to school and pretend you're a normal kid. But after a while, your old boss notices you. He sees how well you've done on your own, how well you've survived, and he wants you back, and he won't stop at anything to get you... (I'll just leave that hanging there. As of it probably won't happen for a while).

Profile~ (please do NOT include the words in parentheses)
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Name/Number: (What is your serial number? Also, keep in mind that you more then likely named yourself.)

Age: (5-16)

Robotic parts: (I have a couple rules/guidelines for this slot: One, you can only have up to two added robotic parts; and they can't all be super awesome. Try to make at least one thing lesser, seemingly meaningless; leave some of the good stuff for everyone else. Two, be creative! Try not to copy someone else's ideas.)

Appearance: (Written AND picture. Both! )

Personalities: (Please try to include likes/dislikes and strengths/weaknesses)

Up for love: (Self-explanatory)

Other: (Randomness about your character)


Rules~ (don't we all just love rules?)
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1. All YWS rules
2. You can have up to two characters
3. *sighs* cussing is allowed, but don't make it a second language.
4. Obviously, romance is allowed (what would a SB be like without it?) But no sex and keep it straight.
5. Make sure you're keeping an eye on the DT.
6. Tomato is a vegetable!
7. Follow the DT, please. That's where we'll be discussing our plot and such. (there's a link below)
8. Be unique. That means if someone else has a chick with lazer gaze don't make a character with lazer gaze.
9. Be creative! I can not stress this enough. If you must ignore all of the rules but one, follow this one. (not literary, follow all of the rules. Except maybe number six...)


DT~ topic74903.html Click this link to get to the DT, and please stay updated.

Have fun!

Yurriko~

Girls~
BreakAway~ Kaiter
Fictionfantic~ Gia
Undertaker~ Adrian
SweetMoments~ Gretal
MilkandCookies~ Lily
Allygrlxox~ Bree

Boys~
BreakAway~ Cy
Apple~ Eden
Fictionfantic~ Enzo
DaSpetsnaz~ Eli James
Cspr~ Achilles
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Name/Number: 6. Kaiter (No one calls her Kate. No one. Except maybe her boyfriend, when she gets one)

Age: 16

Robot parts: Kaiter has a set of mechanical wings; they're fourteen feet in wing-span, yet they can fold up completely and fit into her back. She also has a voice box that can mimic any sound.

Appearance: Kaiter has messy, greasy, blond hair. Brown/yellow eyes. About 5'3. She has two metalic, 7' wings. Like the photo except both of her wings are metal and she doesn't have a metal arm.
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Personality:
Kaiter is a fighter, she won't ever give up and, even with her disciplined up-bringing, she's not all that obedient. She's a natural leader and can be described as a mother bear, don't mess with her cubs. She tries to be tough as nails, but inside she's passionate for everything she does. Kaiter gets jumpy around too many people, especially nicely dressed people and people in authority. She loves nothing more then spreading her wings and flying.

Up for love: Yeah.

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Name/Number: 23. Cy (or Josiah or Cyber, if you like)

Age: 6 1/2 (and he won't let you forget the half part)

Robot parts: A robot eye; it has any kind of super vision you can think of: night vision, telescope vision, magnifying vision, X-ray vision, and photography; but it's only his right eye. Camofloge, he can change the color of his skin to blend in with his surroundings.

Appearance: He has ruffled blond hair and a teel-blue eye (his other one is metal). Somewhere around 4'.
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Personality: Cy is an average 6-year-old boy; he likes to play and have fun. He's full of mischief and love, and loyal like a dog. He shows as a tough little kid, but inside he's rather scared. Cy is good at sneaking up on anyone or anything, this is usually his big prank, he loves scaring the dickens out of people. He likes things that all little boys like: trucks, guns, alligators, and building things. His weakness is his stomach, he's always hungery and he'll let you know when he is; he talks a lot and can get on your nerves.

Up for love: Nah

Other:
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Name/Number: Gia - #3

Age: 15

Robotic parts: The right half of her face is completely metal but it has completely no use, her back is metal, and three of the fingers on her left hand are metal (pinky, ring, and middle. And they don't really do anything except for one being a lighter, another being a pocketknife, and the other contains poison in it...nothing major.)

Appearance: Gia has thick, wavy, black hair that goes down to the bottom of her back. Her left eye is a very light brown with golden flecks in them and the right one is silver. The right half of her face (hairline to jawline) is made entirely of metal. Her entire back is made of metal which is layered. When she gets angry or is fighting they rise as a defense mechanism (She's ripped a lot of clothes in her life of part robotism). Her pinky, ring finger, and middle finger are made of metal. She is six feet tall and very slender.
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Personalities: Gia is very protective and possessive of herself and others. She hates people touching her unless she really knows them and likes them. She's always picking fights with people she doesn't know/like. She's not afraid to speak her mind and she's always the first to throw a punch. She desperately wants friends, but she has trust and anger issues so they always get in the way, and she thinks people are always against her (because it's what she grew up with). She just needs someone to show her that not everyone is bad.

Likes: Fighting, being with people she knows/likes, being different from everyone, rain, the cold

Dislikes: People touching her (unless they're fighting), when people don't like her because of how she acts,
being different from everyone

Strengths: She good at defending herself and fighting for herself. She's an amazing singer, but usually only sings when she is alone (or thinks she's alone) or with people she really trusts...which right now isn't anyone yet.

Weaknesses: She tends to push people away, she's always picking fights, she has trust issues, she has anger issues

Up for love: Yes

Other: She has an obsession with brushing hair for some reason.
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>>I may add more.

Name/Number: Eden "Bat"/12

Age: Fifteen turning sixteen.

Robotic parts:Eden's legs are robotised. He can fly with them, run and jump higher then any normal human or anything for that matter, but other then that, Eden is pure human. Click the link for an image of what it looks like. Just imagine it a little less feminine, and get rid of the chick all together. The green glow is always there so it also acts like a flash light. Which comes in handy.

Appearance:
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Blonde hair and green eyes, Eden looks rather ordinary the only thing that makes him stick out is his lightening green legs. He's rather tall standing at 5' 9" though he often wishes he was tallet and will sometimes drape an old sheet around him, levitate off of the ground and strut around at a healthy 9' 2". His dirty blonde hair swathes his face in a wave which isn't intentional though some think it is, he also likes to wear a broken set of earphones around his neck even though the jack cord has been chewed through.

Personalities: Eden is a chirpy person that likes to see the good things in life. He is ditzy at times and often likes to stress that if it weren't for him, the others would fail. He loves a good laugh and is probably the most childish out of the group (except for Cy, but they get on good anyway). Eden is very strong hearted and will stand by his friends through thick and thin though he can easily lose his temper and usually takes it out on them. He is considered a joker and often likes to pull mediocre pranks that never work out the way he wants them to. One of Eden's largest faults is his bad hearing and sight, you could practically say he is blind. It's kind of the reason he is nicknamed bat. This leaves him easy prey, if it wasn't for his friends, he'd have be wripped apart by wolves by now.

Up for love: Yes

Other: He likes to sing though he probably shouldn't. Eden also has an obsession with broken watches. He loves searching round for a new one so it can join his collection which has almost taken over his arms.
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Name/Number: Enzo - #89

Age: 16

Robotic parts: His entire chest, where his lungs are at, is metal and it allows him to breath under water. He also is programed with a clock in his brain, so he always knows what time it is.

Appearance: Enzo has pretty pale skin and black hair that goes down to his shoulders. He has big, light blue eyes. He's normally seen in black and he has metal layer that wraps around his chest, which allows him to breath under water (He has something that allows him to be the only one able to go into water without malfunctioning and rusting)
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Personalities: Enzo is an outgoing, take whatever life throws at you kind of guy. He loves to be loud and can get kind of obnoxious. He loves water, swimming, dancing, and talking. He dislikes silence, having to always swim alone, and being made of metal. He's very strong at swimming, knowing the time, and running. He's weak at shuting up, he can be very obnoxious, and is bad at being alone for to long.

Up for love: Yes
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I missed this.

I'll post my profile soon. ^^
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*Needs more people* Anyone?
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My friend allygrlxox would like to reserve a spot on here
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May I have a girl spot?
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Yes you may. :)
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Yay! I'll make a profile tomorrow then. ^^
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Name/Number: 35/ Elijah James (Call him Eli)

Age: 16

Robotic parts: One of his arms are metallic, and it is a chain gun with an endless supply of ammunition. He also has the ability to shrink himself into a ball about a foot all around so he can fit in small spaces. (Can't jump or shoot in ball mode.)His right leg is metallic, and he feels no pain when it gets hit.

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Written: His hair is a little different from the picture, it goes down to his forehead and he keeps it sort-of messed up on purpose. He is tan, is 6'1, and weighs 180 pounds. Yeah, he's a big boy.

Personalities: He is a nice guy but he has a short temper and is dangerous when it goes off. He likes humorous people, and he has a strange obsession with fish. He hates people who have to have it their way, and he hates drinking oil out of a can. He is a perfect shot with a gun, and he will go target shooting occasionally when he needs to get a break from the world. He is very bad at walking, because when he got thrown out, his metal leg got bent slightly.

Up for love: Yes.

Other: His favorite movies of all time are the "Terminator" series.
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Name/Number: Adrian Wilson (#13)

Age: 6

Robotic parts: April ears are robotic, they allow her to be able to hear at a range of 25 miles away. She also had a GPS chip installed in her brain, so it is almost impossible for her to get lost. The GPS chip also allows her to locate places and sometimes even people.

Appearance: April has long blond hair that goes to the middle of her back and her eyes are a light purple.

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Personalities: April is someone who is very sweet, friendly and postive. Two of her favorite pastimes is drawing or "doodleing" as she likes to call it and playing around.Two of her downfalls are that she trust people way too much and that she acts like her age. She can keep a secret and is very loyal. Very rarely will she throw a fit, but when she does it is not hard to clam her down. She is someone who tries avoide vilence.

Likes: Drawing, animals, her friends and playing around

Dislikes: Fighting, yelling, or shouting

Up for love: Nope.

Other: She loves drawing, she carries around a sketch book and pencils with her at all times.
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Name/Number: 24, Gretal. Gretal chose her name from a fairy tale book in the junk yard that she liked.

Age: (5-16) No one knows what her age really is sometimes she appears 5 other times she appears 18.

Robotic parts: Her brain is programmed to allow her to morph and change into future and past versions of herself which is why no one knows whats her real age.

Appearance: Gretal appears to look like a normal girl, with blonde hair that when she is younger (5-11) it is lighter and kind of curly while when she is older (11-18) it starts turning straighter and darker as she matures. Her skin is pale and she has freckles across her cheeks and nose. Gretal has brown eyes.
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Personalities: Gretal is very mature even when in her younger self she acts as an 18 year old which is her oldest form. She is very quiet and prefers to read and write than have someone invite her to a party. She always gets angry when someone treats her like a little girl even when she is in a little girl form.

Up for love: Yes

Other: Gretal carries a worn out journal and has stuffed 'the Hansel and Gretal' tale inbetween its pages.
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Ok, hopefully we can start soon. I think we have about enough people, but I'm going to wait to hear from Yurri and Ally.
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