If I Were a Bumblebee

If I were a bumblebee I don’t know what I’d do.
I guess I’d fly around all day and buzz the whole day through.
But if I were a bumblebee I know one thing for sure-
I wouldn’t buzz around the cows- 'cause they'd shoot me with MANURE!!

I love this poem. It's short and sweet. It is nice to read happy poems on here instead of so many sad/depressing ones. Well done and keep writing!

Haha I like your poem. It's nice and uplifting. I love small rhymes that allow you to visualize a short story. Very sweet. Loved it.

I like it! It reminds me of times as a kid. Its very refreshing and sweet, that is..before you get hit with manure! But its great, keep doing what you do!

I like this. Simple, yet fun and playful. i look forward to reading more

I really enjoyed this poem, it was simple, funny and brought a smile on my face. It was really uplifting and happy when it sometimes seems that everything around you can be so dark (I'm ill in bed at the moment and I've been watching the news a lot today so please excuse that little bit of depressive writing). I really hope that you will make some more, maybe with different animals.

It made me laugh in these times of tissues!!!

OMG!!! You like totally picked the correct bug because I'm totally obsessed with bumble bees!!!(i just dont show it) I reckon that if their not trying to sting you they could pass as the cutest thing in the world! Apart from if there was acartoon version of it then that would be the cutest thing in the world!!! I'm also obsessed with Bunnys, Owls and emo comments!(that doesnt mean I'm emo!)

You, my friend, make me laugh. Laugh, laugh and laugh.

Hahahaha I love love love this. Simply shortly sweetly funny. Keep writing, this was so adorable to read.

You, my friend, make me laugh. Laugh, laugh and laugh.

Same here!
I totally love this poem, it put a smile on my face!

I'm in class, and had to control myself from rotflmao. Haha! Nice way to end such a sweet, short little piece. I expected something deeper, but am VERY glad my expectations weren't met! Keep it up!

~Panda;;