Anime...?

I drew this just recently, and it's probably my ultimate favorite!!

Awesome job! The eye seems a bit off to me, mostly because the lines are a little shaky in there, while they aren't anywhere else. If you cleaned up that area though, the lines would all be very well done. I don't know if the shakiness was intentional in order to convey the eye watering or something, but for me it's more distracting than anything else.
Also, I think that you could change the font, both type and color-- you could use something that would lend more emotion to the picture as well.
OTHER than that though, this is superb. I love the color and the words you've included. The drawing itself is really well done- nice anime proportions and everything. I love it. Great job!

-Coral-

Nice work Nightsiren.
Even to me the eye seems a bit off,may be it should have been a little smaller in size.
But I like the hair,its colour,the blush you gave on her cheeks,and also the little sparkling touch the her eyes.good job.


-Sayani

I really love this piece. Its sooooo emotional.
The colouring is really beautifully done and the way you have designed it provoks emotion.
Plus the writing reminds me of some Alesana lyrics which is always good in my book I tend to write round their music, haha.
Overall an amazing piece.
Well done!

OK! I love this!

You've really captured the manga style, and yes, the eyes are meant to be big, but that eye just seems too big. maybe make it smaller some how? just a little? it looks odd compared to the rest of her. the colours you have chosen are perfect and i love the writing next to it. really deep and meaningful. sorry, i'm hopeless at reviews in the moment, i've not really reviewed for months. D=

Well done!!!!
MysticalBlood

M'kay, I'm not really sure how to reply directly to individuals yet so.... Here we go!

Persephoneia wrote:Awesome job! The eye seems a bit off to me, mostly because the lines are a little shaky in there, while they aren't anywhere else. If you cleaned up that area though, the lines would all be very well done. I don't know if the shakiness was intentional in order to convey the eye watering or something, but for me it's more distracting than anything else.
Also, I think that you could change the font, both type and color-- you could use something that would lend more emotion to the picture as well.
OTHER than that though, this is superb. I love the color and the words you've included. The drawing itself is really well done- nice anime proportions and everything. I love it. Great job!

-Coral-

Persephoneia, thank you for pointing the shakiness of the eye out. (: I hadn't really noticed before, but I can see where you're getting at.
What color and font would you suggest for the text, then? o:
Thank you very much!

Shine wrote:Nice work Nightsiren.
Even to me the eye seems a bit off,may be it should have been a little smaller in size.
But I like the hair,its colour,the blush you gave on her cheeks,and also the little sparkling touch the her eyes.good job.


-Sayani

Thanks, Shine. I seem to be getting that a lot. The eye is a big big, I agree. I guess I went over the top?
Not to toot my own horn, but I really liked the hair, too. It was random scribbles at first, so I'm glad it turned out nicely.

LilySoulMahon wrote:I really love this piece. Its sooooo emotional.
The colouring is really beautifully done and the way you have designed it provoks emotion.
Plus the writing reminds me of some Alesana lyrics which is always good in my book I tend to write round their music, haha.
Overall an amazing piece.
Well done!

Oh, thank you, thank you. I'm glad someone recognized an amazing Alesana song. Most of my drawings are based off of whatever emotion I'm getting from bands like Alesana, Crossfaith, etc.

MysticalBlood wrote:OK! I love this!

You've really captured the manga style, and yes, the eyes are meant to be big, but that eye just seems too big. maybe make it smaller some how? just a little? it looks odd compared to the rest of her. the colours you have chosen are perfect and i love the writing next to it. really deep and meaningful. sorry, i'm hopeless at reviews in the moment, i've not really reviewed for months. D=

Well done!!!!
MysticalBlood

Thank you, MysticalBlood! Yeah, the eye's kinda big. Most of my drawings end up like that for some silly reason. o: And don't worry about being helpless with reviews; this was great.

This is very, very good. Technically, the eye isn't very proportionate, and it's a little too far to the side of her face, but I love it. I think the fact that it's too big really jumps out and makes her pain so much greater. The blush on her face adds a very nice affect. Her hair is smooth and nicely shaded. The outfit is very pretty, and I think adds to her personality.
Most of all, I love when people add quotes or words to their paintings.
Awesome job, keep drawing.