Monsterous Color

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Well, I was going to go to sleep, but I created this instead :) It was meant to just be some dude in profile, but I got a little carried away with the paints.
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Hah, this is so awesome xD I'm not sure if these were your intentions, but I think it's cool how the picture takes on a darker tone as you focus more on his face, and a lighter one as you focus on his hair and the colors around him. Sort of makes me think he's hiding something. Then again, I read into pictures too much sometimes.
Anyway. You're really talented :) Keep it up!




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Wow you're great! When I try to draw faces, they look. . . bad. I think you're nose is a little small, (I'm a perfectionist :)) and I'm not positive that the pupil is in the center of the eye. Otherwise, I love the colors, as the title says, and how you use different tomes at different parts of the painting. I like the eye colors, spectacular!
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Hiya, XxTheBlackSheepxX!
Wow, this is really good! Once again, I can see a bit of a manga influence, paired with your own style, and the result is neat! I especially like your use of paints and the way you rendered the subject's eye. It's stylized, yet very lifelike.
Keep up the good work! :D
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Your eye for color astounds me.

I have only one thing to say. I know he has a lot of hair and everything but still I think you should indicate the ear somewhere. I dunno it just seems odd to me that I can't see the ear.

Other than that I think this picture is awesome! The colors, the fading and the background all make him look so mysterious and frightening. I love it!
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xXTheBlackSheepXx,

This is really pretty, but it could use a few improvements.

1. The nose should come out a little bit more - it seems too flat to me.

2. Perhaps make the lips more pronounced? That might be a personal touch, though...

3. I agree with bEIL3 that you should have a little indication of his ear somewhere.

Anyway, other than that, it's really, really beautiful, darling. I encourage you to keep drawing and painting your heart out! Have fun!

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This is awesome, and I love the title as well. My only suggestion is that you make the features a little more prominent. The nose and such in detail is blending in with the color...well...in a way that's good and relates to the actual picture and title so it works either way!



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