I Wish

I wish we could be together again.
I wish it all to be OK in the end.
I wish we make up all our differences.
I wish you wouldn't be just friends.


I wish to be the air you breathe.
I wish to give all the love you need.
I wish to hold you again.
I wish to feel you.


I wish to be your light in the dark.
I wish to be your warmth in the cold.
I wish to be the tenacity of our hopes.
I wish to preserve all your charm.


I wish us to be sun and moon.
I wish us to be yin and yang.
I wish us to be totally absorbed in each other.
I wish to be yours forever.


I wish we could be together again.
I wish it all to be OK in the end.
I wish we make up all our differences.
I wish you wouldn't be just friends.

I really love this piece of poetry.
Makes me smile and actually really reflects some emotions that I have started feelings recently. Its a beautiful piece.
I seriously wish I could write like you. You talent is beyond any other.
And I just love the way you structure each piece.
Well done hunni!

I love the flow of this, and it has a nice, but sad feeling to it.
The way it is written is awsome,
and I can picture the person thinking this looking at the person it's aimed at, if that makes any sense at all

Keep Writing

Geroonniiimoooo

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I wish we could be together again.
I wish it all to be OK in the end.
I wish we make up all our differences.
I wish you wouldn't be just friends.

I wish we could be together again,
I wish it will be okay
I wish we make up our differences
I wish we wouldn't be just friends

nice poem..

Overall I thought this had a good flow to it. If I may make a suggestion, perhaps lose some of the periods? You don't necessarily need them after every line, and it would help to continue the string of wishes you have unweaving throughout the poem. Other than that, though, this is a good write Well done.