The first one is kinda out of focus, but the colours are nice and so is the angle. the lighting is a bit off too, that would be a lot better is only you focused it right. Camera is kinda too close to the flower dont you think?
Second one is slightly out of focus but you can make out the details. The editing around it helps bulge it out a little.
I like em XD but you need to get better with the focus thing. i really don't like saying negative things, if you want i can remove this review. ~Liquid
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Hello! Okay, first things first. This review might seem harsh. Just a warning. Anyway, 1. + great colours and tones. 2. + nice colours on the flower again.
Okay, both of these have faults which I'm gonna tackle together. Firstly, the focusing is non existent. I don't know if you're using a camera or a mobile phone, but these are very poorly focused. The first one almost blends into that material! You can't fix this on the computer, so you're gonna have to retake. But if all your photos are turning out like this, there must be something wrong with your camera/phone. Secondly, the edited one. I'm sorry, but this is just very poor and almost childlike. I'm not really into overedited photos like these though...
Hmmmm. Not the best I've seen all day. I've seen worse, but this is certainly not the best. The main problem you have is with the focus. I'm not sure if you know (you probably do), but quality and focus is a HUGE part of photography. Withhout them, your shots are...well...crap. So I leave you on this note, never sacrifice quality.
Hello, keep up the photography! =D I'd like to say that I'm a fan of the second one, it's so artistic and out there and just makes you think to your self how wonderful the world around us really is, I'd try getting it in a better focus and trying that kind of edit again, a really nice focused photo would be so amazing!!! I'd have to save it to my computer, so my only complaint is the quality of the photos.
I definety think the second photpgraph is beautiful and the first one to me is out of focus. But, both of them display a beauty in the everyday world that to me is very deep and if I was you I would continue with photography
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Both the photographs are good but the first is well out of focus.... And the second one is also a little out of focus but the editing can divert the mind from the focusing part... Keep up the good work mate...
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