Two Spirits, One goal[accepting]

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(my other storybook failed before it even began, so i changed it to this, sorry for the confusion.)
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Over many years, the battle between good and evil has been sugarcoated. The real story is much different then told. Each person born during this time was split, half good, half evil. Both sides live in the opposite place. Now, a boundary, separating the two different worlds has been established.

You, are half of yourself, though you don't know until a group of soldiers explain the situation to you. Your goal, Is to cross the boundary, and all its obstacles, And reunite with the other part of you. The challenges given, are difficult, if not impossible to overcome, so during the journey, you form groups. If you make it to your other half, you must both go to the boundary line, and stand together in the middle, to be rejoined, then you are sent to a new world where the battle of good and evil does not exist. When they split your spirit, you lost your free will, thats why you are fighting.

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I'll join! Sounds cool.

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That is, if anyone else does.
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Name: Madeline aka: Maddie
Age(14-20):16
appearance:brown hair,blonde streaks,pale white,5'7, she weighs 123 and her eyes her crystal blue!
strong points: runs fast,doesnt let people get to her if they talk crap about her.
weaknesses: she thinks she is ugly
personality:fun,loving,caring,smiles alot,always hyper,looks for adventure and hopes to one day find her match, loves to play fight.
history: She lived with her mom angela til she went off in the middle of the night and left maddie to fend for herself,noone actually knows about it. Now she still lives in the house and goes on small jobs to keep herself alive, her dad died when she was 7.
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up for love?: YES!!
other: She has a ruby necklace her dad put around her neck before he died in the hospital bed because of a massive head injury,she keeps it there for good luck.
The truth will come out baby, and you'll be the only one lost in the dark >:)




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(The list was a fail, so I switched it to this newer idea i thought of.)




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Name: Seth
Good half or bad half?: Good
Age(14-20): 14
appearance: Long 'emo' hair, brunnete, 5" 5', slim build,
strong points: Very good fighter, marksman, extremely good with parkour
weaknesses: Falls in love easy, overconfident
personality: Cocky, doesn't take crap, likes to show people that size is only a mental thing
history(optional): Left by father and mother. Raised on streets by a friend.
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up for love?: Yes
other: Really is up for love :P
Other half appearance: Short hair, tall, coward




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Name: Falon
Good half or bad half?: good
Age(14-20): 16
appearance:
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strong points: Falon is one of the smartest girls you will ever meet. Her looks will fool you, she is an amazing fighter. Her long legs let her move smoothly and faster than most, she is very balanced. Falon's scream can break glass, so be careful.
weaknesses: Falon struggles with speech, she often has trouble explaining herself. She is VERY afraid of heights. She is scared of people like her brother, and usually over thinks things when under pressure.
personality: Falon has always had a shy nature, but she tries her best. You can usually find her in a tree reading or writing, sometimes playing her guitar. Once she is determined she is a force to be messed with. She tends to stand out everywhere she is which is an advantage and disadvantage.
history(optional): Ever since she was born, her brother has been out to get her. When she was 11 he pushed eher in front of a moving car which almost got her killed, but resulted in permanent tire tracks and burn marks all over her body and face. Her parents always trusted her brother more, and looked at her as if she was insane. during the war, her brother was sent over to the evil side.
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up for love?: yus.
other: she always has these key chains on a bracelet, each one is filled with something different, she stole them from her mothers shop before starting her journey.
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and this necklace, the color changes whenever certain creatures are around
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Name: Monica
Good half or bad half?: good half
Age(14-20): 15
appearance: Tall and slim, blond hair, and dark eyes. : )

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strong points: Runs fast on long legs, extremely quiet and sneaky. Good fighter if she has to be.
weaknesses: Sometimes let's people get to her.
personality: Timid, intellegant, has never had many friends, most of the time Monica is overly pessimistic.
up for love?: sure
other: loves music, and never really got to know her family since her parents died when she was small. Doesn't get really close to a lot of people, except for a boyfriend she had a long time ago.
Other half appearance: Looks similar to Monica, but her other half has lighter eyes and darker hair.
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
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Sounds fun!

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Name: Attra
Good half or bad half?: Bad half
Age(14-20): 14
appearance: tall and slim
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strong points: beautiful and physically strong, knows the ways of the wild
weaknesses: was brought up in the forest and does not know how to survive in suburbia, is so focused on trying to find her other half that she will do anything to get it, does not know how to make friends
personality: cool and calm until something stops her, then she has a terrible temper and will do her best to destroy anything that gets in her way, will not stop at something she wants until she has attained it.
history: She was born a princess, but fell out of the royal carriage as it was traveling through the forest. The wolves took her in and made her a child of the wild, caring for her and raising her as one of their own.
theme(optional): none
up for love?: One could try, but she is too wild.
other: Here is her closest wolf friend, Rraka:
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The wolves found Attra with a single silver necklace, the only memory left of her royalty.
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Also, Attra has a little white mouse, her only friend. But the mouse (Siki) is not enough. Attra is on a quest, and she will let nothing stop her from getting a new friend.
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Attra's other half is sweet and shy, with a golden opposite of Attra's necklace:
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Name: CJ Leota
Good half or bad half?: Good Half
Age(14-20): 15
appearance: CJ is tall at 5'9". She weighs 97 pounds. She has blonde hair with a little added blue that is a few shades darker than her eyes. She has a small build for her height.
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strong points: CJ is quick on her feet and can climb. She is not cocky and is pretty quiet. She is also quite independent.
weaknesses: CJ is very stubborn. She also has a temper. She is also a strong believer in retaliation. And she is very isolated.
personality: ^see strong and weak points.
history(optional):CJ grew up in a terrible household. Her father was abusive, physically and mentally. He abused her mother to the point of killing her. CJ had an older brother as well. He was ten years older than CJ and when he turned eighteen he ran away. CJ has always resented her brother for not taking her away from her father. Eventually CJ's brother found a police station and ratted out CJ's father and he was caught and arested. She still has marks around her neck from the day her father was arrested. It had been her mother's birthday and she had been grieving for her. Her father caught her and began to strangle her with a shoelace. She was almost unconcious when the police rammed down the door. To avoid going into childcare services, CJ ran off while the police were busy with her father.
up for love?: If you can break through to her.
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This storybook sounds kinda neat :) If it continues, I'll join in!
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Name: Madalion
Good half or bad half?: Good
Age(14-20): 16
appearance: black hair, crystal blue eyes, she is short for a 16 year old.
strong points: has good reflexes
weaknesses: she is emotional and her feelings get hurt alot
personality: fun,caring, when your around her you feel like you can trust her with anything. She loves to hang out with people and to meet new people. Up for anything you throw at her.
history(optional). she lives with her sister anabelle and anabelles husband Jonathan.
up for love?: Yes
other: had a pink teddybear necklace that glows when she is happy and turns black when angry, also purple when she is sad.
Other half appearance: scar on her left cheek from a fight with a wild animal. has a hole in her arm. in the back of her head she has strands of red hair barely noticeable.
The truth will come out baby, and you'll be the only one lost in the dark >:)



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