Trapped In A Box

This is one of the sketches which are very old... It is from when i started drawing.... I'm bad with hands and fingers so please forgive me for it...




I hope you people will like it....

It's nice. You really caught the frustrantion on the characters face. Proportions are good , just watch out for the hair and her right hand. Normally you have that line [ I really don't know how it's called ] on the center of the head , and your seems a bit off. But it is good.
Nicely done.
*bows*

Hey, Pervy here. The idea is very amusing, and it's funny to make up solutions to how the hell she got there. Now onto the piece itself. (I know it's an old drawing, but I suppose I must...)

As you noticed, the fingers look scrambled. I've always had this problem till now. I suggest you get someone to take a picture of your fingers the way you want them to look like in the draft (What could look more realistic then copying from an actual picture?)
*cough* moving on...the left eye is missing. You might not have noticed it, or just ignored it but I suggest you draw the other one too.

The left breast isn't round enough; it looks kinda disfigured. Try putting thought into it ^^

I also suggest you work on the shadings, and outline it with a stronger pencil.

There's some points, I might have missed a few but I suppose the others may pinpoint them out. Iike the idea, but the actual picture still needs some work. (:

Sincerely,
The Perverted Iguana~

Ooh, nice. I just clicked on the title and then, found out that you're the one who drew this xD. Here I go again with my useless review. Anyway, I like it. It looks modern and looks like something that could be included in the school paper xD. (I think.) Like what the other reviewer said, you caught the frustration on the face. The other features look fine too. I don't think the hands/fingers have much problems (except the fact that the position of the fingers look weird). xD Hands/Fingers are really one of the most common things that are hard to draw. What I do is to draw them slowly and to keep on looking on my own hands so that I would get the fingers right lol. The same goes with the feet. Well, I'm not really good at drawing. The thing is that the box looks too abstract to be a real box. She looked like she's inside a pillowcase, but that's not a big thing. Keep drawing.

I liked this sketch, it shows the emotion clearly on your girl's face. It's very nice!

Nike

What got her in the box in the first place?
I really liked the how you portrayed the frustration of the girl with her facial expression

Love it- the style is wonderful, and I love the emotion. Nice job on the casual, almost-sketchy lines... they don't feel constrictive, but they aren't sloppy either. I DO think that you could work on the hands a bit more. I know you said that you're not good with the hands, but if that's the case, don't press so hard or anything. They're quite dark and so the eye is drawn to them- tone them down and make them kind of vague. I think it would really help. Also, just try balancing out their sizes.

Last thing: I know that her hair is covering part of her face, but it would be great if you at least hinted at the left eye- as it is, it feels a little awkward with all that white space. If you don't have to do that, make her hair longer.

Great job, overall.

-Coral-

I like this, it made me giggle.
The facial expression is used really well and the way the body is twisted in the box show shes desperate to get out and has tried everything but failed. Though itd really be cool to know how she got in, maybe she was captured...
Sorry giddy comment, but seriously I loved it.

Gee, I love when art makes me laugh. It means its good at least. Anyways:

So the shirt has a few problems. It seems to me that you can not tell the difference between skin and shirt (other than the obvious line). There needs to be a little shading on either the skin or the shirt so that it is more clear which is which. This is even more important on the left arm, for hair is covering it. Also, the folds in the shirt seem more like daggars. They are really pointy and kind of look like somebody took a bite out of her.

This may just be my guy senses, but the breasts (i hope they are breasts and not fat...) seem to be pointing outwards. Enough on this subject :p.

Ya. It's pretty good. Keep up the great work.

As all of you people wanted to know how she got there...
First i wanna introduce her... She is my elder sister...
She ate all my cookies and gave me a low blow so i decided to box her up...
So now as you see i have succeeded in my endeavors....