...and it was so cute, ain't you sad you missed it?
Last edited by Jherek on Sun Jan 02, 2011 7:44 am, edited 1 time in total.
"Common sense is the little man in a gray suit who never makes a mistake in addition. But it's always somebody else's money he's adding up." R. Chandler, Playback
Haha! That was a cute little story! I especially liked Sally the Snail. That was a cute little character you made up there! At first, I thought it was going to be poorly written, and immature, but that wasn’t the case in the least! I didn’t spot many errors and it was written very well! Keep up the good work!
Happy writing!
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"Common sense is the little man in a gray suit who never makes a mistake in addition. But it's always somebody else's money he's adding up." R. Chandler, Playback
