Jackelyn

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So, this is my little cousin- we were outside at my grandparents' house, and she kept on pulling these goofy faces at me whenever I got my camera. HOWEVER, I did manage to capture some somewhat decent pictures when she wasn't looking. :)

1. Untitled

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2, The Goofster

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3. B&W Smile (my personal favorite from the bunch)

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4. Soul.

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Thanks! :)

-Coral-




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1. Very good, It actually reminds me of the billboards I see sometimes when going around in big cities. You know the perfume ones? A very good picture and you caught her eyes very well.

2. This is my personal favorite. It reminds me of those cartoon characters expressions. I really like her hair. It goes perfect with her eyes. Also the background doesn't conflict with her. It actually makes it look perfect, with the blurred background.

3. I like this one also. It does show alot more of the background more than her face and the face is alot lighter and you can also notice the streaks even though it is black and white. But in the top left corner it gets darker for some reason. It may be a bush or something.

Anyway, your sister is very pretty and you've a very good photographer. What camera do you use?

*Sorry missed out number 4. Might edit this later.
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very nice. The second and third ones are my favorite, mostly because I love how the highlight in her hair pops. In the pics of her eyes, the area around her eyes seems a little too dark and it gives off kind of a depressing mood. I'm not sure if that was what you were going for, but if you brighten it a bit, it might help.
Great pics, though :)
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Very nice pictures. My favorites are number 2 and 3. I think 2 is my favorite favorite.
1) Nice. I like the pictures of her eyes. Like Mazzi said, it is quite like a billboard.
2) Love it! I like how it's looking down on her. She's looking at you like she knows a secret that you don't. This is my absolute favorite picture.
3) I also really like this one. It's very cute and innocent looking. I can see how this one would be your favorite picture. It's cool that she's looking away from the camera. Very cute.
4) I like this one too. It's a good picture of her eyes. It may just be me, but I think the view of it makes her freckles stand out which is pretty cool.
So, anyways awesome pictures and great job. Just F.Y.I, I'm always checking if you posted new pics because I'm trying photography, and your really good. You give me Ideas. Great job :D
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Aww, cute :)
She has beautiful eyes, and you're very good with a camera! :D
The black and white one is real nice. xx
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Aww, cute :)
She has beautiful eyes, and you're very good with a camera! :D
The black and white one is real nice. xx
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Hello!
Well, first things first. She's adorable! How are you finding the US then? :P
Anyway, on with the review (sorry, it'll be quite short) :P
1# This is really sweet. The tones are great, as is the focusing. But I'm not sure I like the cropping... but then again, I'm an aspect ratio girl :P, but it would have been nice to see a little more of her face - more to look at.
2# This is lovely! Excellent focusing, the tones, yet again, are fantastic. This could easily be a B&W image too!
3# This is my favourite. It's not really clichéd, which is good. Nice post processing, great amount of contast. Focusing is spot on, nice positioning. Perfect!
4# This is one which is yet again, really good. I prefer this one over the first as there's more to look at, and its nicely off centre.

Overall:
Fantastic job, no faults at all really.
You're very good at photographing people, and capturing some of their soul in the photos! This could be an area of expertise for you, very very easily :P
Well done,

-snails-




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Awesome photography . The eyes are my favorite, and cute little girl too . =]
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Awwww shes adorable :)
The photography is really good, I love the lighting. The eyes are good.
You have a real talent seriously :) Makes me smile. Haha.
I also love the nature behind her, its like Humans and Nature at peace instead of us destroying its beauty.
Beautiful.
Well Done!
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