White Witch

This is a drawing that I did on the computer, Enjoy!

Hello there
Wow, you did this in your computer? It's pretty impressive. I can't draw anything on my computer. Now I'm not an artsy person so I don't really know what art people look at when the critique, so I'll just drop an opinion from my side. Very creative; and the purple background just pops everything else out. Nice.

Dear SweetMoments,

Your picture is pretty good! I can't really ever draw anything impressive on the computer except a few girls. I think I will try for this, but I am not really sure that many people will like it. And that's all that matters on www.youngwriterssociety.com, isn't it? The reviews of other people.

Well, anyways, your picture was great. I hope that later, you can draw better pictures and you can improve too. When i say that, don't think that I am saying that your picture is really bad. It's pretty good, really.

Keep reading and reviewing!

vstarfirix

Wow! A beautiful drawing made by a true artist. The picture itself is fascinating and the thought of you doing it on the computer make it even more inspiring. Great work and I would award this picture 60 points.

Hey there, Sweet!

Awesome drawing! I'm quite a fan of digital artwork so this is quite amazing. Did you use a mouse or do you own a tablet? As for the drawing, I really am in love with her hair. It's very pretty and stands out. The details are also quite nicely done and the necklace and beads in her hair and all, it was a wonderful choice of colors. My only real nitpick would be the choice in background color. I would have used something different to make it pop out more. Nice job, keep it up.

^.^)b
-Pink

Thanks for the reviews guys, and Pink I used a mouse for this

Fantastic job, really! Very creative, I really love the use of beads and textures to create this. The blue tint is very pretty.

Hello there, SweetMoments! I hope you are doing well.

Alright! Like many of the other users who have commented on this piece, I do like it - but I did notice a few things that can definitely be improved if you ever were to redo this. First of all, I know PinkShearwater mentioned how she adored the hair, but that's one nitpick I have with this drawing, actually. As unique and alluring as the hair on this 'White Queen' is, I find myself it looks like you jus pushed a big and fat white cloud down and upon her head and called it hair. It does not really mold to the shape of this Queen's small skull, and is about the size of the Queen's whole body. Perhaps a bit too much volume in the hair, then, caused this problem.

Aside from that, I think the squiggly white lines drawn at random places all over the black background are kind of peculiar, odd, and a tad unneeded. They don't really look like clouds, wind, snowflakes, or rain, and instead just resemble a squiggly line. Probably not what you were going for, right? Also - how can we tell she is a White Queen? She is not wearing a crown, and isn't sitting on a throne, so if you hadn't titled it White Queen, I probably wouldn't have guessed that's what she was.

My one final nitpick is the color of the background. The background seems so harsh and makes the drawing seem kind of flat, like you just took this Queen, cut her out of her life, and stuck her on a black background, just because. Why not, if you have time, try making a nice castle-like background or wintry forest?

Overall, this is a good drawing. I understand how hard it is to draw something like this on the computer, so nice work. Keep practicing and I am sure you will improve even more! I hope this helps and feel free to message me with questions or comments.

- Mizz

Thanks Mizzle but well, she doesn't have a crown because shes a White Witch as it says in the title not White Queen XD

Wow that's really good I can usually draw a wonky heart on the computer when I'm at my best, but you did an entire person! I love the dress and the colors. Well Done from me

Wow, I could NEVER do that in my computer! I can barely write my own name! Good job, dude!

Wow, on computer? that's pretty amazing. Great work, i really have nothing to say.

Hey there Sweetie. This is pretty great for a digital artwork -- if you're not using a tablet. I love the soft lines of the arms, and the design on the lower part of the gown. Though at first I couldn't tell what the white curved lines were. I'm guessing they were birds? *shrugs* And the background was too plain. Had you meant for her to seem like flying? Oh, yeah -- the hair wisps away. Anyway, keep on doing what you like to do.

~ Jash ♥

Hey!

First up, the textures on this piece are gorgeous The blue and white really look very good with each other, and the swirls look really cool. The thing I don't like are the flowers. They look sort of overbearing in comparison to the rest of the picture. The skin colour is odd, because as a general rule, skin isn't that colour, but it's still a really awesome drawing!

Before I begin, I must ask: is she the White witch of The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe?
Her hair is very well done. The wispy ends are really cool and look just right for a white witch. Unfortunately, none of it come down in the back.