Seriously, please, don't cut it out. I really enjoyed her and her humourous ways. I liked how it tied in with Sheukki also, nicely done.
I don't notice anything different with your style. Maybe this character is just much different from the rest. But I like her. Very much so. I liked the interaction between her and the captain. Very nicely done.
Sorry I wasn't more help, but you don't give me much to work with, friend. Besides encouraging you to continue, I'm pretty useless as a reviewer. Ah well, I'm enjoying the ride.
