Unexpected: Prolouge

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Unexpected

A normal happy life
Can turn to one of pain and sadness
When husband divorces wife
And you can’t control the madness.

Well things are now a bore
Until a simple routine checkup
Turns to something more
And your eyes start to tear up.

It was almost noon
This day was very much expected
But not this soon
But death is something you’ve accepted.

Then you know for sure
That you should always suspect
That life will knock at your door
And you’ll almost always face the unexpected.
“Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia.”
E. L. Doctorow




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Hey, I really like this!!! It hints at what could happen, and it really makes me want to read on. Keep writing!!!




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Thank you!!! :D i will have the first chapter up as soon as i get enough points lol :D :D
“Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia.”
E. L. Doctorow




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I love the fact that you added a poem to explain your story. That's very creative! I don't think I've ever seen anyone do that before. But then when I think about it: why not?
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