Inspiration where'd you go? *Edited*

I really like this! It's light hearted and at the same time conveys emotion with some of the lines you use.
As silly as it sounds, 'personifying' the inspiration brought a really personal feel to it.
the rhyming works really well also, overall i thought it was very good, apart from some of the grammar that people have mentioned (e.g. I thought that maybe you'd like to know; instead of I thought that maybe you'd like to know..) Its great
Well done

Well, I definitly have been asking "Inspiration, where'd you go?!" lately; it's the reason I joined this website! Anyways, I like how it rhymes, that's an good thing to excel at with poems. Secondly, you made it flow. Flowing words define them, and really pop into the readers face BAM! Haa... Also, the poem IDEA was very nice. Even though you might not of, you made it SEEM like you had an idea, and were determined to write it down. That's good.

In my opinion, I'd like to see a poem in third-person from you. I can tell that you can inspire others with words, and putting that to work will definitly do wonders for you.

Overall, I have nothing bad to say, since all the mistakes were already said. Great job on your part!

lovethelifeulive wrote:Hey!
I enjoyed your poem very much and I thought that is was quite amusing.
I think that we all have had our fights with inspiration.
Me and Inspiration play hide and go seek every night in the shadows.
Again, I really liked it and I hope you will write more like this!

Well you could write your own poem on inspiration! XD

Anyhow I just wanted to say thank you to everyone who read this and pressed the like button! I really appreciate it and to be honest I never thought it would even get this many reviews! It was only a bit of fraud (Have I said this enough?! XD)
And so I never expected it to get featured so thank you thank you thank you everyone!
It's all thanks to you guys.
I love you!!!! XD
Kaka xox

I really like this book. It reminds me a bit of myself in that I write books and I feel an inspiration but the problem is that other people have unique inspirations and that nobody seems to be able to grasp what it is that I'm trying to conceive through my piece. I think that your ending is great and that you should not change it at all. This was a great piece that I truly think deserves to be right at the top of this list. You have done something here that nobody else can take away from you and that you should never stop writing because you are obviously just starting to bloom into the flower of brilliance that I can plainly see you becoming soon. In the last phrase I noticed that you said that your back. well, you know how that stupid wal-mart commercial went a few years ago, right? The one where they said that you dont go back you arrive? well, you have truly achieved that and I think that you were born to be a poet. keep going and you might, keep in mind this is just a might, be as famous as Hunter S Tompson for whom I have been named after.

Possum.. That was such a sweet reivew. That's so nice and I know its not half that good but thank you for your kindness.
Its much appreciated.
Kaka x

Haha! I love this! So accurate. This is me right now. Thanks for putting this out kaka!
Luxy

Oh so cute! This is amazingly accurate, nobody could've expressed it better. This may sound odd but I love the way you rhymed back and 'apple mac' as apposed to just 'mac' it really sounds good there. Some of the other rhyming and rhythm sounded a bit forced though so try to work on that. You have a poem with a sort of choppy rhythm and then a couple of wonderful lines that just ring like crystal bells, work with those and you have a flowing poem.

Also, for your last line how about
Inspiration is dead, alas all my ideas have gone numb

Inspiration, where'd you go?!I thought that maybe you'd like to know..I'm dying ~I need your help, Its oh so bad.This book I'm writing.. Its pretty sad,No one reads it.. I gotta go..See you soon, I sure hope so.. Yep it's me, I know.. I'm back!I'm sitting here with my apple macThis book I'm writing.. well I'm crying!Nothing I write is satisfyingReviews are scarceand when they comeThey make my ideas all seem dumbInspiration is dead, alas my ideas have gone to none.

i really like your poem. Well in life I experience what your trying to relate here, and it makes me smile whenever i read this. keep it up!!!

Poem on writers block? xDD Hate writers block, love this!

A fun poem. Good job as I see all the errors have been corrected by others. Still, dispite this, it's a good poem.

I think that its good and I feel the same way sometimes. But it helps to imagine yourself in a state that you feel the most passionate about. Poem is passion.