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I'm new to this site and just thought I'd give an introduction. I came accross YWS as a result of a google search, and thought it would be nice to receive some input about some of the stuff I've written.
While I don't claim to be a grand writer, I write to express myself and what I'm feeling at a given time. I'm 22 years old and have been writing since 2004. Most of what I write would probably be described as lyrical poetry. In fact what I've written I've always intended to be looked at as lyrics to a song (although I've never written music). I think I have a total of around 25 pieces now.
I'm a Christian, and much of what I write has definitively Christian characteristics. Some would even be considered "worship" poetry.
I'm currently working on a book (fantasy novel or novella depending on what the result is when I am finished) and may post chapters for critique once I've polished it up a bit.
I guess that's it.




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'Ello Epidemic! Welcome, welcome! Hope you like it on here!

Google is how I came across YWS too >.< I don't even recall what I typed into the search bar.

You write lyrical poetry and have finished twenty-five pieces? Awesomesauce! I lack the capability to write poetry. Correction. Good poetry! What sort of fantasy do you write? Epic, urban, etc?

Well, hope to see you about the forums.

Meadow
Purple light in the canyon
that is where I long to be
With my three good companions
just my rifle, pony and me

--- "My Rifle My Pony and Me"




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Well, I never claimed that all 25 of the pieces I've written are good. In fact, some of the ones I've written I re-read and absolutely detest the way they came out, but don't really have the drive to rewrite them. At the same time I don't have the heart to just delete them. I've only rewritten one or two that I had a clear understanding of what I wanted to say, but needed a few years to acquire the creativity/vocabulary/inspiration to make them say what I intended for them to say all along. In all honesty, I only have 8, maybe 9 poems that I really like, another 1 or 2 that I'm ok with, and the others are, in a sense, almost embarrassing.
The novel/novella that I'm attempting to write would be considered epic fantasy. So far I have finished preliminary drafts of the prologue, first, and second chapters, and have written roughly 2/5 to 1/2 of the third chapter. The total length comes out to just under 13,000 words so far, but I'm hoping to get inspiration to add more detail and description when I go back through everything.



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