Seriously, thanks for posting. But I've found no nitpicks. I'm useless :'(
I love your story and your writing style. Your characters are unique, but I've already told you that. I love this world you've created. Really love it.
I'm sorry I don't have anything else to add. But, you're just that awesome .
I'm not only here to make it obvious how useless I am at critiquing your writing, but to let you know that I still love this!
I feel so bad because I'm not critiquing or anything... It makes me feel so blahish. I doubt you want to hear a load of OMG! I luv thisss like loooads!!!!!!! comments, so yeah... I'm sorry. I hope you don't mind too much.
Basically, just keep doing what you're doing, and maybe request a review from someone who's really harsh and notices things so easily, they're weirdos, or something.
