Life Is But A Dream: Prologue

Prologue

Everyone alive has a life of some extent. Or corse all of us do. Even I do. However, we all know that life is unfair. Life is filled with misfortune. Life is a mystery that cannot be unfolded. This is a novel dedicated to a life that has such a small existence, but this life feels the pain and anguish that any human does.

This is a really good introduction to a story, it's obviously short, so a wee bit harder to review, but I'll do my best! First of all I think that

MyLifeMyStory wrote:Even I do

is a bit of a strange line to put in in the context, as we would normally expext someone to have a life. This might of course make more sense if I read the rest of the story, but right now, I don't fully understand that line. Second point is

MyLifeMyStory wrote:Or corse all of us do

I can see a typo there but that is probably unintentional, but I would also change it to 'Of course we all do' I think that flows a bit better. Thirdly and lastly;

MyLifeMyStory wrote:but this life feels the pain and anguish that any human does.

I might change this to 'but this is a life that...' or something similar. I think that would also flow better. Hope this has been helpful to you, and look forward to reading the rest of this!!

MyLifeMyStory wrote:Prologue

Everyone alive has a life of some extent .

- This seems a bit redundant.
What are you trying to say exactly? It is obvious that those who are alive are living, but do you mean they "have a life" or something like that?

MyLifeMyStory wrote: Of course all of us do.
Even I do.
However, we all know that life is unfair. Life is filled with misfortune. Life is a mystery that cannot be unfolded.

You don't really need to put "however" there. it sounds much smoother without it.

How about this...

Prologue

Everyone has a life to some extent.
Of course we do.
All of us do- including me.
We all know that life is unfair. Life is filled with misfortune. It is mystery that is yet to be unraveled.
*This is a novel dedicated to a life that has such a small existence, but this life feels the pain and anguish that any human does.

* I didn't change that sentence, but I'd remove it, if i were you. It makes it seem more like a summary or forward, rather than a prologue.

Prologues are more like a pre-scene? from the story from the point of view of one of the characters, or the narrator. The reader isn't really supposed to be told in the story that it is a novel.
( maybe you could place it as a dedication)