...To Be A Snowflake...

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Sionarama
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Wed Dec 15, 2010 8:50 pm
Sionarama says... · Wed Dec 15, 2010 8:50 pm
If I could, I'd be a snowflake
so light-weight and free
carried on the whims of the wind

If I could, I'd be a snowflake
each one individual
but with a uniform sameness, safe and calm

If I could, I'd be a snowflake
freeing kids of treacherous work
and providing them with a place of wonder

If I could, I'd be a snowflake
nature's own miracle
spreading a soft blanket for the Earth to sleep in

If I could, I'd be a snowflake
the difference between
a blizzard and a sprinkling

and even though
I would only last moments
those moments would be eternities
and when I fall safe to the ground
I would know I did my part
in making the world a better place

...To be a snowflake...
"You may not be educated well in the areas of etiquette and the like as a princess, but you do throw some bashing good parties!"
Not all princesses are pink sparkles.
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Butterfinger
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Wed Dec 15, 2010 9:30 pm
Butterfinger says... · Wed Dec 15, 2010 9:30 pm
Sionarama wrote:If I could, I'd be a snowflake
so light-weight and free
carried on the whims of the wind

If I could, I'd be a snowflake
each one individual
but with a uniform sameness, safe and calm

If I could, I'd be a snowflake
freeing kids of treacherous work #FF0000 ">(Always been my fav. part of winter!)
and providing them with a place of wonder

If I could, I'd be a snowflake
nature's own miracle
spreading a soft blanket for the Earth to sleep in

If I could, I'd be a snowflake
the difference between
a blizzard and a sprinkling

and even though
I would only last moments
those moments would be eternities #FF0000 ">Wow, you pin-pointed the reality and wonder of being a snowflake with a purpose!
and when I fall safe to the ground
I would know I did my part
in making the world a better place

...To be a snowflake...




#FF0000 ">I love it all! It's such a strange thing, thinking about being a single snowflake, fated to melt, yet with such a beautiful destiny!
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Rayneisthename
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Wed Dec 15, 2010 10:26 pm
Rayneisthename says... · Wed Dec 15, 2010 10:26 pm
This was a really good poem! Ironically, I actually was going to write about comparing myself to a snowflake....But anyway, very well done. You used descriptive words making the poem have good imagery. Nice job! :)
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skebe
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Wed Dec 15, 2010 11:09 pm
skebe says... · Wed Dec 15, 2010 11:09 pm
LOL
Why do you want to be a snowflake???
Just Jokes! Snowflakes are 'COOL'!
I like the song cos i like snowflakes!

Sorry!
I'm no good at writing reviews!
I like it!
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