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If you're looking for quick love, just find Insecurity, and loneliness.
If you're looking for something more, Good luck.


If you wouldn't mind leave me a comment in one word how this makes you feel. I'm trying to put together some statistics.
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Sad...

Oh, and, I'm not sure if this is considered poetry...

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Hey AtticusGallows,

Ok, well, this (I agree) does make me feel a little sad and lost. But I feel even though there are only two, very short, bittersweet lines, its also feels somewhat dramatic to me.

I kinda also agree with SilentRain, I'm not quite sure if this is considered poetry, I suggest putting it in "Other". But good luck with your statistics anyway!

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Different
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Sad, but true.... Life it is, what more can i say..

GG




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Thanks everyone, I know it's not poetry I didn't see the "other poetry" option.
My bad.
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Hi there I'm China Cookie.

How this makes me feel...makes me feel how I've felt most my life and yes all you have said is true




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It makes me feel hopless, but at the same time the hopelessness triggers a sort of desperation to prove it wrong.
I like it though =)




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Indifferent.

Because I really don't have an opinion that's either positive or negative. I guess the quick love part kind of made sense, but the Second sentance I didn't necesarrily agree with.

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More lost then I am now.
! Time to Write !



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