The Moon

A light in the darkness.
It lights the ground,
It lights the nature all around.
The beauty of its naturalness.
It filled my heart,
right from the very start.
A light in the sky,
I will not lie,
It is so bright,
It is, my midnight light.

Beautiful. I thought it was really creative and intresting. (im not that good at reviews, just compliments...)

I think this is really good, I can't find anything wrong with it. My favorite part was the last two lines, being that I have always thought of the moon as my midnight light.

Hey, Karr.

I really liked this and it was good. The only things I really have to say about it is this:

* Try spacing your stanzas or else the whole thing looks crowded. I put all I have to say in bold.

A light in the darkness
It lights the ground,
It lights the nature all around.

The beauty of its naturalness
It filled my heart,
right from the very start. The rythm kind of gets messed around the third line of the stanza.

A light in the sky,
I will not lie,
It is so bright,
It is, my midnight light.

Now, I'm not sure about puncuationo in poems, I'm still working on that myself, but other than the little I had to say, I think this was really good.

Reise!

Hello there! Jash here for a random, short review.

I have nothing to nitpick here, i.e. typos and such, but I do have a wee problem with the structure. I know this is poetry, but the way you've used the punctuations, and have inserted fragments were distracting.

For example:

A light in the darkness.

...period.

It lights the ground,
It lights the nature all around.

And so on...

I suggest to delete those ending punctuations; they're unnecessary and just break the flow.

But set those aside, this was a very nice poem. =) I like the words that you used; they were simple.

Keep writing!

~ Jash ♥

Beautiful. While reading one can feel the charm of the Moon. One can feel it's affection on him. Really beautiful.

GG