Cupcake

I'm sorry if somehow you ignored the title and thought that this was going to be some serious poem, cause it isn't. Actually, I wrote it on FaceBook as an example of how I could write a poem about anything, even a cupcake. And I actually kind of like this one, cause I think it's kind of funny! Sorry =]

Cupcake,
Oh cupcake,
You taste very sweet,
And yummy,
And you have a hint of vanilla,
In your icing.

Cupcake,
Oh cupcake,
I love you man,
It's true,
And now,
I will,
Devour you.

Cute, I actually love cupcakes, like... LOVE CUPCAKES. This poem makes me want to go make vanilla cupcakes and mope around all night and get fat. I mean, I love cupcakes so much, my email is steph_loves_cupcakes, And im twenty freakin years old. Anyways, it made me happy. Thanks!

I chuckled after reading this. You've got kind of the dame style of writing poetry as my sister. You are blunt, get right to the point, and have a good voice. I like cupcakes as well (but no butter cream, yuck), and I think that this does ahow that you can write a poem about anything. Very nice job, with no real corrections needed that I can see.

So I was disappointed that it wasn't serious. LOL Anyway, nice one. I won't be reviewing now. XD

Well, it's about food, which is awesome.
I loved how short and cute it was.
Simple wording
Georgie x

I LOVE CUPCAKES. I mean who doesn't they would have to have something wrong with their taste buds. Oh man, I love me some cupcakes. You did a great job on this poem. Even though it is simple. Sometimes you have to break from the regular and take a break.

-awee! I love CUPCAKES too!

Yay! Cupcakes!

If there's any suggestion I would give, it's that I think the rule of three would be nicer here. So, basically, you would have three stanzas talking about cupcakes instead of just two. I don't know... I love the rule of three! It makes everything balanced and magical.

But yay for cupcakes! The vanilla ones, for some reason, always tasted better than the chocolate ones.

I Loved it! xD actually laughed at the sneeky ending - loved it =D

OMG. I LOVE CUPCAKES.
You just made my day. There is nothing better than a poem like this(and that also on CUPCAKE!) to relax you after a hectic schedule. I liked you work a lot but it would have been better if it was a bit lengthier. Not a lot long but just a small bit. You can write a lot of things on this topic. Let your imagination run wild. Now you made me hungry. xD
Keep writing.

I like this.
I mean, THANK GOD it wasn't a mushy romantic poem or something.

But now I'm hungry.Hehahha.
Bottom line- really cute.
" I will devour you...."
Nom Nom Nom
Hahhahah

Keep writing!
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-Jojo

NoOoZzz!.|! Itz nawt seriuss.

Anyways, i liked this poem. It added a touch of comedy to my day. I thought this, for some strange reason, was going to be about some girl. I was pleasantly suprised. But yes, I give this a 5/5 even though my ratings don't mean much

-WU

Hm! I like it! It's simple and very cute! Awesome! Half people's writing at first is like this but they scratch it out because they think it's dumb. But YOU didn't. That's really great, because sometimes all a person wants to read is a simple, happy poem. Keep on writing! Good job!

Hi there

I like this. Just a simple, sweet poem about a cupcake, nothing more nothing less. I like the structure and the flow of it, although I think making the sentences longer would benefit you. I also think you should add some length to this, it doesn’t feel fully complete yet.