Hey, there! I'm Jashy and I'll be reviewing your artwork for today.
I really thought that the title suits it. It made me laugh when I saw the artwork, 'cause at first I thought it would be "lovie-dovie" artwork. In other words, I was surprised that it's about smoking, and I was like, "Hey, nice one!" I think that the concept is good and suits the theme well. But there are some things that I can nitpick on.
Fist, I think that the woman on the right seems to lack expressions. She would have been all "Man! Stinking smoke!", but you've drawn her like, "sigh...smoke". So what I think is you could have made the frustrated woman show that she's annoyed of the smoker. And, oh, I almost forgot, her hair! It seems like it's dead. O_o It doesn't show any flow.
As of the smoker, the woman at the left, maybe you could have made her lips a bit like pouting to show that she was blowing out smoke. I also think that the smoke wasn't quite shown; it was just a swirl of blue. You could have added emphasis there. Maybe made it puffing around the whole artwork. Plus it was behind the smoker's arm. Now, that doesn't seem much of a disturbance.
And why was the coloring like you made a 'wishy-washy' with your colored pencils. (Wait, are they colored pencils? Just a guess but I'm quite sure they're colored pencils. LOL)
On the other hand, the colors were nice. (Though it lacked shading.) And it's also a nice artwork as whole! =) So very, very nice job! The concept, as I have said, is probably the strength of this piece. KEEP DRAWING! Feel free to drop me a wallpost or PM me if you have any questions.
~ JAsh ♥
“I believe in Christianity as I believe that the sun has risen: not only because I see it, but because by it I see everything else.”
