Hello, my peeplets!

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Hi,
I'm Jasmine.
You can spell that any way you want,
Jazmine
Jasmin
Jazzy
Jassie
Jazzie
Jassy
Whatever pleases you!
So my dear friend told me that she was writing here, so I joined!
I am writing a new story(it is called Love Story) the beginning isn't very good, but it gets better.
two people commented that it sounded choppy -what does that mean??????
I love poetry, because there are sooo many ways to do it, and I love rhythm schemes and all that.
I really enjoy romance, fiction, mystery and action adventure.
I am going to the School of the Arts for drama and piano.
What does that have anything to do with writing? you ask
well I'm a very dramatic person so if you add drama to creativity you will get writing.
Because I'm a can come up with a scene and make it dramatic (so I think)
So yeah...thats all.
Thanks for wasting a minute reading this!
Last edited by lovethelifeulive on Sat Dec 04, 2010 1:51 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Hey! Welcome Jazmine!
-max
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Hello hello!
Welcome to YWS!
It's a great place for some critiques. SO, why don't you tell us more about yourself? What genre do you like? Do you enjoy poetry too?
Have fun here. :)
Hope to see you around!
~Lava
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